SSBB- Battleship Harlberd Interior

SSBB- Battleship Harlberd Interior by Sabre_
This is based off of a level on Super Smash Bros Brawl with snake infiltrating the facility.. The difficulty is easy and its a straight platform/shooter level also 1 PLAYER ONLY If more than 1 player joins the host will be the only person to spawn.

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This level i'd say isn't my best level made because im more of a story level making but ill let yall be the judge of the level. Theres some pics up top hope you all enjoy the level and cant wait for the feedback.Also would like to thank my partner in crime L1ghtMare for pushing me to get my level done lol because I was starting to slack off and not do it, and also would like to thank NinjaMicWZ for helping out with the level also.

Looks cool, i'll play it now and leave some feedback later.

K, the level is being delayed for 30min or so until I fix a problem thats going on with the level I said if you do play try it by yourself :)

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THE LEVEL IS PUBLISHED NOW

Just played this level. Another well done level. It seemed to run short...but I think that was because the last one I played of yours was much longer. The 3D worked well, I liked how the robots would just come at you. I liked the fact I could shot them or just smash them (not a big paint gun person). The ladders looked better, I liked how you could just grab them, some of them went a bit jumpy on me, and the hand was odly placed on a few, perhaps a single rung with-out the hand visible, or a laddersclader (like an escalader). I like the puzzle feel, but a few of the levels almost seemed too hidden (almost) maybe a little clolr to them, but still hidden. The lights to control the robots from moving too far were all over, you could expand them out to put more through the level so they seem more like leve design than keeping the robots in place, just an idea...it looked like you were doing that at times but I wasn't sure. The jumps were all good, the spring boards worked perfectly, but I could see the points of the springs sticking though on a few of them, and on the last part, the spring board that shoots you up to the lever, or if you try harder to the hidden little area with bubbles...that one trapped me twice killing me when I was too close to the edge, and when I was below that I could see a little anti-grav hidden behind it and the light. Oh at the start the bouncy bridge with the falling blocks with bolts on them above were kind of stuck against each other, and only the top bolt stickered blocks would fall, the ones below never did until I made it to the next bridge. Can't really think of any more things. Had fun playing...would have liked it to go a bit more, but it is always best to leave the audience wanting more. If you get the chance I could still use some more feedback on the Choice level (I overhaulded the 3rd level, and I still don't know if the forest or the level looks alright).

Yeah the 1st bridge isn't meant to fall its suppose to be stable & the ones above it if stepped on wrong could get stuck but will definitely fall. With the creature placing with the lights the only problem was the more i put the worse they get due to thermo since they take up ALOT. Also with the pads the springs are suppose to show because those arent really whats throwing you up the real ones are invisible.Sorry the level had to be short but as I said them creatures kill thermo & Im thinkin rather or not to make part 2 which I've started but dont know if ill go through with it, it'll depend on how part 1 turn out.. Thanks for feedback & ill get back to you on your part 3 level.

On the springs I was not saying they looked bad, but I could see the little spring points that stick through the floor. It wasn't bad...just noticed a few of them sticking through.I didn't know the little creature lights took up thermo...I happed to have used them for effect lighting in two of my space levels...that may be why the thermo was quite high... :(

Hmm, sound sinteresting. :D I'll give this level a play and tell you what I think tomorrow or the day after. :p

Well I played this level today and I have to say it was awesome. My favorite thing was the visuals, I loved your 3D and decoration work. When I saw your entire level revolved around killing creatures I thought it might get a bit repetitive, however, you threw in enough changes such as looking around to find switches, to keep everything fresh. But, I did incounter a few problems. My first issue came when I went through the 2nd blue teleporter door, as soon as I spawned the two creatures rushed me, one knocked the other out of the creature navigator, it killed me and fell over on top of the checkpoint. Every time I spawned the spikes on the side killed me instantly, over and over forcing me to restart the level. While I loved how you confined the player to one plane, it also caused me a little problem, twice I somehow got myself out of the middle layer forcing me to retry. Still these minor problems didn't come close to getting me frusturated and overall I loved the level:p. :star::star::star::star: and a heart,oh and thanks for playing my Rust level.

Okay, I played this level and here's what I thought.

I thought the theme to it was great and the lighting was nice. I liked the design of the enemy robots and like celsus said, you could shoot them or jump on them or shoot where you jump on them :p. I liked how you traveled through teleporting, at least, that's what I think it was but anyway, the level did feel kinda repetitive, fighting all the robots. I liked how there were cubes that dissapeared or were bouncy and when running across that bridge of cubes and each were dissapearing, although I think it ould've been cool if they re-emitted after a couple seconds when they de-emitted. When going out of a checkpoint after the cube part and teleport, I just didn'd move and an enemy robot stopped but another pushed it forward which killed me, when respawing the spike was right there and illed me again, respawn, killed, respawn, killed and I eventually returned to my pod. I'll give this another try but for now, it's :star::star::star: Good job, I hope I'm not being too mean and maybe later on it'll get better :)

Edit: Sorry D: Just noticed it said 1 player only in description. Will play it again alone and give you another review if I can get further.

Edit 2: Please, forgive me and ignore the review above. I can't believe I didn't think it could've been a shooter and I got past tht little bug. xD. Anyway, here's the REAL review for your level.

I loved the lighting in this level and the theme, great job. It is definitely one of m favorite shooters and I also liked the option of shooting it's brain, it's body or jumping on it's brain! I liked how you traveled through teleporting(I think) and there was a greta amount of gameplay. I think the jump to the first switch in the trash bin part was kinda hard, but I eventually got it. I liked how you could bounce up on those orange things and it was a real blast to play. I will adit you should fix that problem I had with the original review but it was still a marvelous level. :star::star::star::star::star: and a <3 Will definitely mention this one on my blog :D

Hey just played your level and <3 'ed it! Thought it was great especially the style of the level and the enemies throughout.
No complaint really but I did find a few glitches... Like Coreyeatpie above when I came into the third or fourth room two creatures attacked me and one fell over the checkpoint killing me every time I respawned. And in another section (The one with 3 MGS cardboard platforms and three enemies!? Hard to describe!!) two of the creatures had fallen over before I got there so werent much of a threat (this could have been a one off thing tho cos it didnt happen to me the next time). Apart from that I think you could highlight some of the switchs with lights or something because I almost missed 2! Or maybe that was just me :p.

Anyway they're small complaints which didn't ruin any enjoyment. Good work on the level!

I'd love to know what you think of mine too!! I tried to include as much variety as possible. Heres the link: http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...alker-Patriots

@Coreyeatpie

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My first issue came when I went through the 2nd blue teleporter door, as soon as I spawned the two creatures rushed me, one knocked the other out of the creature navigator, it killed me and fell over on top of the checkpoint. Every time I spawned the spikes on the side killed me instantly, over and over forcing me to restart the level.

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When going out of a checkpoint after the cube part and teleport, I just didn'd move and an enemy robot stopped but another pushed it forward which killed me, when respawing the spike was right there and illed me again, respawn, killed, respawn, killed and I eventually returned to my pod.

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(The one with 3 MGS cardboard platforms and three enemies!? Hard to describe!!) two of the creatures had fallen over before I got there so werent much of a threat (this could have been a one off thing tho cos it didnt happen to me the next time

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Sorry guys I see yall all had the same problem with room number 2, I had tested this level tons of times trying to fix this one problem so I was rushing through killing things with no problem trying to get to this 1 particular spot and didnt even realize how fast they rush you. I will definitely fix that problem ASAP thanks for feedback and Dangerlove I'll play your level right away..

I absolutely love the detail! It was quite awesome how you used the invisible material glitch to stop players from moving around enemies.

I ran into one problem though ,that not-so secret passageway with the speech bubble. Once I went in there there are the 4 or 5 doors each requiring a switch. I went up the ladder and I saw the first guy. I popped the bubble on his head and it didn't die! I had to jump over it to get farther! (I uploaded a picture of me beside the guy, hopefully it is still there)

Other than that I felt that the gameplay was a bit... lacking and could be better, but since you were recreating something it was not entirely your fault.

Overall this level gets :star::star::star: from me!

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Originally Posted by Tomeh999

I absolutely love the detail! It was quite awesome how you used the invisible material glitch to stop players from moving around enemies.

I ran into one problem though ,that not-so secret passageway with the speech bubble. Once I went in there there are the 4 or 5 doors each requiring a switch. I went up the ladder and I saw the first guy. I popped the bubble on his head and it didn't die! I had to jump over it to get farther!

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If the enemy ever does that its just a slight glitch it doesnt always happen but hope you do know if that does happen you can kill the enemy just by shooting his body not just the brain :) thanks for the feedback..

New Update:

-Slowed down the creatures in room #2 so they dont run each other over and kill you constantly at checkpoint

This level is definitely like same design of the level as "Super Smash Bros. Brawl". The visuals looked neat thanks to some interesting lighting and layer glitch. The gameplay is good too and enemies looked great even though they're a bit close to look like the ones from Brawl. The only suggestion I have is that one of the ladders has an invisible grab switch that sort of got me confused on what I supposed to do with the first ladder until I grabbed something. Overall, great level and worth 5 :star:s and a <3.

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Originally Posted by JustinArt

This level is definitely like same design of the level as "Super Smash Bros. Brawl". The visuals looked neat thanks to some interesting lighting and layer glitch. The gameplay is good too and enemies looked great even though they're a bit close to look like the ones from Brawl. The only suggestion I have is that one of the ladders has an invisible grab switch that sort of got me confused on what I supposed to do with the first ladder until I grabbed something. Overall, great level and worth 5 :star:s and a <3.

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Thanks! and I'll have to check out all the ladders to see which one is invisible, I thought i made all grab switches visible but if your talking about the material you grab itself it suppose to be like that but ill definitely double check the ladders to see if I made any invisible. Thansk for the feedback :)

Hello!! i was play ur level and i like it, the design is very good, the puzzles of the switch is a good idea and the enemies and the teleport doors i love so much, is a good job but not ur more BIG work, nevertheless i have given you :star::star::star::star::star: because i estimate much that the creators take his time in the construction of the design and that it is really pleasing at sight and yours it is, for the only thing that he would add it would be a bit more of amusement. :)

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Originally Posted by psyntens

Hello!! i was play ur level and i like it, the design is very good, the puzzles of the switch is a good idea and the enemies and the teleport doors i love so much, is a good job but not ur more BIG work, nevertheless i have given you :star::star::star::star::star: because i estimate much that the creators take his time in the construction of the design and that it is really pleasing at sight and yours it is, for the only thing that he would add it would be a bit more of amusement. :)

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Thanks Psyntens! I was wondering were your feedback was lol I usually see you on all my post and yeah I mentioned it myself that it wasnt my best of work also because Im more of a story level creator not much all about the platforming shooter type of levels but Im glad you looked at the work put in and I appreciate it :) if theres any levels you would want me to play or test just let me know i'll get to it right away.

Thanks Sabre!!! i´m doing two levels and maybe finish one LOL and u see my post here :) but i´ll say to u

Alright, good work! Visuals look just like Brawl (except with less enemy variety).

Your robots like to get stuck, and then I can easily snipe them.

In the place with five levers, near the bottom right there's a set of spikes that are coming out of their pit. Also, when you're down far enough, you can see DM and LCDs behind the springs. The springs could use some visual treatment as well.

I liked the use of decorations and pipes and stuff. Great job with that.

When I teleported to the end, some lights flashed. Turned off too late, maybe?

Overall good work, :star::star::star::star: and a <3!