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10-08-2010
Inanimacy

Project Mayhem.

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Hey guys! Made a new sig and I sort of wanted some C&C on it :)

I've been hooked on Fight Club (and Brad Pitt) for a while, and while I was searching through some Render Forums I was inspired to make a Tyler Durden signature, so, what do you think? (Banner was also made by me xD)
Also, I was thinking about giving this to rtm, because of this post :p

Anyway, thanks for stopping by!

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"I Am Jack's Smirking Revenge."
10-08-2010
Bremnen

This is why I started learning about philosophy and psychology:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=98LeL...eature=related
10-08-2010
TheChannel

Nice, I like how Tyler Durden is in the back that represents the subliminal Messaging found in the movie.
(Or at least that is what I assume its from)
10-08-2010
rseah

Some cnc:

When placing elements in a sig try to follow the rule of thirds. Basically the idea is to get the main focal point where any of the lines intersect. (You don't have to follow it but sometimes it works better)

I like the concept of the sig and the small effects work well. The lighting and depth is also pretty good but could be improved with a bit of burning and dodging.

Overall good job m8 KIU
10-08-2010
Inanimacy

THANK YOU. Finally SOMEONE gives me pointers >>'

I love you <3
10-09-2010
TheChannel

Pointers? Remove the green lines on the left.
Or was that already said?
10-09-2010
Inanimacy

Surprised you even saw those, that's not really a pointer xD it's more of an opinion cuz I like those lines....
10-09-2010
TheChannel

Is there very faint letters to the left of Jack?
10-09-2010
Inanimacy

Nope, only text is the one that says Tyler Durden
10-09-2010
rtm223

Quote:

Originally Posted by Inanimacy

what do you think?

The first rule of project mayhem is you do not ask questions.

I just thought I'd come by and drop that in there ;) I don't really do sigs, so I don't have much advice to give here, but it is pretty cool, and I'm digging the Tyler face on the side - it's just subtle enough that you don't see it straight away, but you also can't miss it :) Nice
10-09-2010
Rhyfelwr

A few things of note...

The border is a nice touch - mimicing the faded text tones.

The positioning of the text is odd - you've chosen a busy area to put it and there isn't much contrast between the text and the background. In addition, you've overlaid the Durden (not wrong in itself) so that the D is almost lost.

I only know of one artist on this forum that manages to pull off a central focal point and it ain't you or me... Personally, I would have offset the main FP and put just one faded image to one side, rather than duplicate it to either side.

Just opinions...

Rhy