the burning cave

the burning cave by nosemomkey
hi guys!

so, right now im showing one of the oldest levels in my moon!
seriously, this level is older than fear of the dark, but it never went online becouse of its former "dullness"...
it was dull becouse... well, becouse this level is an RPG, based in shallow springs (i played it, loved it, and then created an RPG becouse i thoke
"well, if AFP made so many success with shallow springs, i probably can get to the most played pages!!!" :)
but the problem is that i only focused in the scenary and the gameplay was left behind, so the level was all like "grab, run, talk, grab, run, talk, etc...)
but now i added some gampley elements and the level is ready to go!!!:D

and the story :
pretty simple story, just more sacks who seek fortune and fame and those kinds of stuff, but this time... in a desert!:D
i hope you like it, and i will give feedback to anyone who gives me feedback too:royalty:

(and i whould really like some photos too :p)

Sounds interesting... As soon as I find where my psp has walked of to i shall play it...

c'mon guys, this will probably be my last PSP level and i'm getting no feedback at all :(
just tell me what you guys think of it...

the reason i'm not going to make new levels for a while is becouse i bought a PS3 and im trying to learn how to build with it)

Yeah when mine gets out of the pool I'll ask him.

Hey NM! i played this level and i thought it was great!
the good: puzzles were pretty cool, the layers and things were set nicely, called B3's character king bill so you acknowledged him.
the bad: corner editing, confusing, couldn't understand what the king was saying 'bout a light house so i couldn't finish it. :(

i gave it 4 stars anyway :)

trying it now!

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Originally Posted by jimydog000

Hey NM! i played this level and i thought it was great!
the good: puzzles were pretty cool, the layers and things were set nicely, called B3's character king bill so you acknowledged him.
the bad: corner editing, confusing, couldn't understand what the king was saying 'bout a light house so i couldn't finish it. :(

i gave it 4 stars anyway :)

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thanks, for the feedback JM000, you were the first one in this thread to actually tell me stuff 'bout the level :D
just one quick thing: sorry about my lack of directions, but i was hoping that everyone could relate the fact that the house homeless-guy wanted us to open was the watch-house (why watch-house?, no idea :p)...
sorry about that :(
do you want me to play any of your levels?

Sorry for the lateness of my reply... I GOT SECOND HIGHEST SCORE!!! WOO!!!... I enjoyed it alot but I felt that you could have worked on a bit more scenery... The only one big problem was sometimes the cannon on the right side just squashed me. The bridge too the cannon sometimes had gaps too large so I fell through.

I liked the aspect of going both sides of the cave! And I felt bad about the dog! 4stars for you...

Please F4F my level: The Snowball Snowman Survival Chalenge!

as soon as i figure how to connect my psp online this is my first level im playing

Hey nosemomkey I'm going to get a psp sooner then I expectid so I'm going to remember to play your level.

whaaat? the frez dosn't even have a psp?
that explains a lot. :D
anywho nosemomkey play: Jetpack'n Adventures, it's not that good but i'm working on another level that 'ill be awesome.

i'll try and finish this level :)

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Originally Posted by jimydog000

whaaat? the frez dosn't even have a psp?
that explains a lot. :D

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He doesn't?!? Then why does he post here, or say levels are good if he can't play them?

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a2..._im_confus.jpg

So about the level, it was good, but not as good as your other level, blue blitz. I'm glad you tried something new, in this case, and RPG level, but there were a few problems. Some of the materials didn't blend well together, and the sticker editing wasn't to impressive. Also, I'm going to be a grammar nazi and tell you your conventions where all too great. (Conventions are like capitalization, periods, commas, etc.) Other than that, this was a great level. Well designed characters, really long, and legit story. I'm glad you made this, and can't wait to see what you try next :) :star::star::star::star:

@everybody thanks for your feedback, and sorry i didnt thanked your post sooner (or played your levels) but i've been away for a week (got grounded :p), and now i promise you guys are going to get your levels played :)

@the-frez: sure, take your time getting a PSP, i can wait ;)

@valmassoi

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Originally Posted by valmassoi

So about the level, it was good, but not as good as your other level, blue blitz. I'm glad you tried something new, in this case, and RPG level, but there were a few problems. Some of the materials didn't blend well together, and the sticker editing wasn't to impressive. Also, I'm going to be a grammar nazi and tell you your conventions where all too great. (Conventions are like capitalization, periods, commas, etc.) Other than that, this was a great level. Well designed characters, really long, and legit story. I'm glad you made this, and can't wait to see what you try next :) :star::star::star::star:

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thanks for the detailed feedback, and yeah... now that i think about it... it makes sense:
"first i creted a level that focus in gameplay, and doesnt care about the story... and now i published a level thats the opposite, it has a long story but almost no gameplay at all" :)

but blue blitz is a B3's creation, not mine, sorry :hatsack:
(mine is bluebox)
but thanks again for the feedback :D

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Originally Posted by nosemomkey

but blue blitz is a B3's creation, not mine, sorry :hatsack:
(mine is bluebox)
but thanks again for the feedback :D

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Whoops :blush: I meant your level. Everybody is so focused on blue I can't get the names straight!