Also no more off-topic stuff...
long as it has to do with the Chao RPG in someway or form it' fine.
but other stuff should be left to VMs, OK? *mew
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Also no more off-topic stuff...
long as it has to do with the Chao RPG in someway or form it' fine.
but other stuff should be left to VMs, OK? *mew
Could you anwser these questions?Quote:
Originally Posted by fumetsusozo
So when are you gonna do the chao art? (or are you not?) and when do we?/are we? gonna write the chapter 2?
Oh and you don't have to anwser the questions i just wanna know the anwser, bye.
Asking me things is fine.Quote:
Originally Posted by catlover
Art will come sometime soon after Doom sends me his designs that he told me to wait on
before i draw his chao.
Chapter 2? i'm trying to think what way to go about it.
1: after everyone's chao get together.
2: after we get least one more writer.
3: after one more round of story turn from everyone.
4: after we get a badguy chao.
i'm thinking of going with least 2 and 3 for now.
there you go. free to ask more if anything comes to mind. *mew
Character sheet for my new Chao is done and put up with the rest on page1.
Spoiler - Art of Nom:
~Story time~
(Day 4 Part 1) Let go of my TV!
Earlier that day before Flash met up with Mittens,
You see Mittens looking happy in a naughty way by the TV.
(Crazy Mittens) Heh~ Now where to start?
She looks beside herself and thinks something feels missing.
(Crazy Mittens) Tis odd… is there nut someone else here in front
of da TV like always right there? I’m sure there was…..
HmMmm…
She looks down by her feet, then sees a… Pocketball?!.
(Crazy Mittens) OhhHh… Now me remember…
Flashback to 5 days ago…
You see Mittens happily running around in the junkyard.
(Crazy Mittens) Yesh! Darklord is about to start!
Gotta hurry, todah’s episode is a special, Dardlord
enters a PIE CONTEST! … oh boy this is gonna beh Great~
She runs up to the TV only to find someone using it.
Now this I mind you is not abnormal as this person in question
Is always using the TV… and when I say always I mean this person never leaves
the TV even If it’s the end of the world and shadow monkeys are attacking and what not.
This person is a cute young looking Chao girl by the name of “Retsnom” or “Nom” for short,
She’s a odd little girl… Purple hair, Black skin, A somewhat long snail like tail…
Oh and lets not forget her Ex-caretaker was a Last-boss who was super powerful and stuff,
They lived happily together, till the Boss fail off a cliff and died one day anyways,
Now she lives here with her new Caretaker Rowunk… Well to be more honest “The TV”
As it’s the only thing she pays notice to… she’ll watch it no matter what’s on, even
If it’s “Puff & Fluff ‘s RainbowQuest show,” and that being a show almost any Dark Chao
Would sooner cut out their own gut then watch.
(Crazy Mittens) Oh no me forgot about her….
Rats it’s impossible to get her away from the TV for long…
She never lets anyone even poke it with out goinen crazy like on them.
I mean I nuw how she feels, Da TV is better then a blueberry milkshake
In the middle of summer, and she’s awesome when she talks, love her voice,
or maybe it’s just because anyone’s lucky to hear more then a word or 2 out
of her every month … heh~
Mittens slowly tries to reach for the TV’s buttons.
(Nom) …….GhrrrRrr!……
Nom’s Tail pulls up high and she has the most angry look on her face,
Mittens backs off fast, Then wonders how she is going to deal with the
TV obsessed friend, as there’s no way she’s going to try that again anytime soon.
Nom knows how to put the fear in anyone. Mittens thinks to her self that if only
She could get Nom away from the TV, but the question is how? Surely just
asking her won’t work? Mittens is puzzled as to what to do, normally
Mittens does not have to worry about it as Nom never changes the channel,
But mittens changed the channel the last night in order
to watch the movie “Axe monster ‘s revenge part2”while Nom was a sleep,
Only now does she see the error in doing that. Then Mittens kicks a pile of junk
out of being mad, then a red and white ball comes failing down next to Mitten’s foot,
(Crazy Mittens) Huh? Wha this be here?
Hey I knuw this…. I seen this somewhere before…
Oh ohh I know, it’s a Pocketball! It used as storage for monserthings
for when peuple are to lazy to take care of their pet….
Or for when the pet gets in the way…. Waaaaitt… Me just got idea.
Mittens grabs and tosses the ball at Nom.
It hits her, sucks her up in to it, then makes some dinging sounds then clicks.
(Crazy Mittens) Yahoo!! It worked! KukuuKu ku~ Sorry Nom old girl…
I R having a show to watch, but don’t worries, I’ll let you out when it’s over K?~
The Flashback ends.
(Crazy Mittens) Oops… I guess me forgot to let her out, My badz, Teehee~
Mittens picks up the ball and pushes the button on front,
The ball jiggles a little then pops out Nom on to the ground from inside it.
Nom looks around oddly and seems scared.
(Crazy Mittens) Errr…. Hii… heh.
(Nom) Huh? Who are you? Where am I? What am I doing here!?
…Are you a Hero?
(Crazy Mittens) Whut? I NUT been so UNSALTED!
(Nom) What!!? You want my salted peanuts? YOU CAN‘T HAVE THEM!!
(Crazy Mittens) …..
(Nom) THEIR MINE!!
(Crazy Mittens) I DUN’T WAN YO DUMB NUTS!!
(Nom) Ohhh…. Err why not? Their great <3
(Crazy Mittens) Oh for the love of….
Loooook! Clearly you been wutchen that TV to long… Yo R like meh Non-blood Sister
yeh hear? We do everything together…. OK I lied, we only watch TV together…
(Nom) TV!? WHERE!?
(Crazy Mittens) Oi… you dunt remember meh? yet you did not forget about dah TV?…
That’s just cold girl. But whatever forget about that. Listen to tis!
I’m gonna go on a adventure to become a Grim reaper and take over the world N Stuff!
Dardlord would be so proud to see that, I bet he’d even pat meh head!
(Nom) Sounds Fun.
(Crazy Mittens) You should come with meh, you always used to talk about how you’d
Like to become a Loss-boss and beat Heros N whateverz~
(Nom) …I Did?
(Crazy Mittens) Err yeah…. You see there was this one time the power gone out
Last year and you said tha, also we talked together for a bit, you were so CoolO
I started calling Chu me Non-blood Sis~
(Nom) Ahhhh….. Nope, No idea, Can’t remember.
(Crazy Mittens) Ya did not last long, TV came back on some hours later,
And lost ya to da TV again. But we promised one another we make are dreams come true
Nu matterz whut ya hear?~
(Nom) Really? You care that much about my dreams?…. I never had anyone care
about me so much for a long time now…. Last was my wonderful caretaker…
Wait…. Sister?…. Yay SISTER!
I’ll help you Sister! I’ll make all your dreams real too!
At that moment Nom jumps and clings to Mittens like a koala,
(Crazy Mittens) Opf… To..oo….Hheea..v..vy…G..Get OFF!
(Nom) I‘ll never let you go… You won‘t fall off any cliffs
and leave your big-sis lone forever while I‘m here to protect YOU!
Mittens then fell flat on her face with a very happy and clingy Nom on her…
(Nom) Yay sister! Lets never be part little-sister <3
(Crazy Mittens) AgggG! BAack to froM which Ya cAme CHu nuT!!
Mittens pushes the button on the Pocketball that re-sucks Nom back in to it…
At this point Mittens’s back feels sore, Mittens thinks to herself that maybe getting a
clingy person like Nom away from the TV and by mistake getting Nom to cling to
her was a really bad idea, Then Mittens gets up, puts the ball in her coat and walks off to take a nap.
(Crazy Mittens) Oi…. Me hope tomorrow… DON”T SUCK!…. Meh back is a like killen me~
Hopefully a short nap then a bite to eat will fix me up good,
I wonder if a rerun of (Attack of the Beaver-blob) is on tonight?
---
(Day-4 Part-2) There’s no better sister then one you can keep in a Pocketball~
Later that day You see Mittens & Flash in silly battle poses facing off Jo & Ko in battle,
Mittens gets her self pumped up and her fists glow blue.
(Crazy Mittens) I don’t know whay you punks are picken a battle with meh again,
It’s not even been a week, but I’ll make sure you dummies regret it like always~
((Mittens thinking to herself)) Oh my, oh my, this no good…. My back is still sore from before…
I better make short work of them or this may not end well, least I got Flash here,
I think he can fight? I mean what else is a robothing good for? Besides opening soda-cans, Heh~
But if not, then I’m in serious trouble, but I can’t let a little thing stop me from my goal.
(Flash) You ok Mittens? Your moving and acting a little strange….
(Crazy Mittens) Hehheeh… Dun’t wooorrrry Robo dude~ It… it’s nuoth…ing… Nothing,
Just had waked up little soon today tis all~
(Flash) Well… Ok then… if you say so.
(Jo) heh… look at them cowering in their boots.
(Ko) Yeah like little babies.
(Jo&Ko) Lets get them!!
Ko rushes at Mittens and fire punches her, the hit knocks her back,
Jo attacks Flash with a metal-pipe he had picked up beforehand.
Flash moves out of the way then kicks Jo on to his face.
(Flash) Mittens! Your hurt! I knew something most be wrong, there’s no way
weak guys like them are a match for you.
(Crazy Mittens) Shut upz… me just was not looking, he got lucky.
((Mittens thinking to herself)) Oh for the love of darkness…. Not good… I can hardly move
After that last attack… and my vision is starting to get cloudy.
(Ko) Ha! I knew you most have been just lucky all them times you beat us.
(Crazy Mittens) Shut yo hole punk, even nuw you got Nn…Nothing on Meh!
Mittens runs at Ko and tries to punch him, but right as she does her blue flame
Goes out, and the punch only pushes Ko back a tiny bit. Mittens then pulls out
her Junk-scythe fast and knocks Ko over. Flash runs to Mittens worried if she’s OK,
At the same time Jo gets up then attacks with a water-wave that knocks both Mittens & Flash
back In to a junk-pile, Flash starts to get back up, but then Ko gets up and fire punches Flash.
(Jo) Heh don’t you even think for a second think that we’ll go easy on you guys today.
(Ko) We are so mad! Yesterday we were stuck in a hole for the whole bloody day!
(Jo) So we are not in a good mood.
(Ko) yeah so today we are really pushing the paddle to the metal!
(Jo) Yeah, so get really to lose!
(Jo&Ko) Ahaahahaa!
(Flash) Oh rusty bolts! that last attack knocked out my batteries.
(Crazy Mittens) …. Me lose? Can‘t happen… Wait… I almost forgot!
I still have my Sister Nom!
(Flash) Who??? And you have a Sister?!
(Crazy Mittens) It’s a long story… she’s not my real sister or nothing,
She’s the girl who is always in front of the TV.
(Flash) Huh? THE CREEPY COUCH POTATO GIRL?!
(Crazy Mittens) Yupz, that’s teh one. And I always wanted to say this….
Go! … Pocketball!
Mittens tosses the Ball she had in her coat-pocket on to the ground,
And Nom pops out of it.
(Nom) Huh? Sister! What happened to you?! Why is by beloved Sister hurt?!
(Crazy Mittens) forget about me, beat up them guys over there! They hate Me…
And err oh yeah they hate TV too!
(Ko) We do? Hey…No we don’t!
(Jo) Who is that?
(Ko) Who cares? Just knock her out of the way, nothing is going to stop us from winning today!
(Nom) Did you losers hurt my SISTER?!! And you hate TV?!
No TV hating morons hurts or even pokes her and lives if I have any to say about it!!
(Ko&Jo) Ehrrr…. You think you take us on?….
(Nom) I Think nothing you little soon to be corpses, I’m not the kid of a Lost-boss for nothing.
Now lets get it to it!
Nom jiggles a little then the Orb above her head glows, and two mini ball like copies
of her self grow out from it, And float around her.
((End of Writer turn))
Another awesome story for another(?) awesome thread!
Yours was funny, and now that I think about it, they were all funny. I better make mine funny. Well funny enough. At least, like, 3 laugh-out-louad moments...maybe 2....1...maybe less than 1.
Anyway, who's turn is it next? Do you decide? Or do people ask?
And is the "Last Boss" caretaker for Nom, the bad-guy Chao? I mean you might make it come back to life. But that would be dumb.
And last but not last, should I PM this sort of stuff to you? Or leave it for everyone to see here?
P.S
:p:p:pTHE CREEPY COUCH POTATO GIRL?!:p:p:p
That, is a new internet meme.
Yeah to make it not to spamy best to talk with VMs, that's not a rule or anything.Quote:
Originally Posted by Doooomguy
but like i just did, i most likely will reply with a Vm if anything is asked here. *mew
PS: to anyone who may had missed it, i posted a new story part today on the last page,
enjoy~
I might join but one question...
Do the Chao need caretaker(s)?
That is all
((I'll get my next part in tomorrow :P))
Here he is
His picture
^seems i got confused, was thinking you were asking to be a writer?
but you told me you did not want to be one? well if you do want to be one,
just message me up but for now unless you change your mind I'll be removing you from the list of writers.
as I'm little unsure what you were wanting if becoming a writer was not it?
Edit: seems he whats to be a writer after he found out he was able to be one after all.
So he's added back to the list now.
Edit2: New Art of Doom's Flash is up.
PS: Come on already people, Upload some stories~
Chapter 1 Day of the Dayrikuu.
Day 1 10:24
Shivers ran down Pip and kays spine.
(Akorath) "I guess I should be leaving, have fun Diala."
(Diala) "Oh I will." Diala turned her head over to Pip and Kay,"Haven't seen you guys in a while miss me?" She said in an ice cold voice.
(Pip) "No, n I never will,ya fatt pig." Pip grabbed the net that she was trapped in and shook it aggressively (Pip) "Now-let-ush-out-ya-hag." (Diala) "Thats no way to speak to your mum." As she talked her voice grew deeper and darker. (kay) "Your not mine or Pips mum." (Diala) "And your certainly no daughter of mine" Diala smiled just like Pip dose, and everything went black.Kay was scared of the dark, and though she dosen't want to admit it, Pip was too.Everything was pitch black and silence Pip and Kay hugged each other in fear of what might happen next-then a ear percing roar broke the silence and everything was clear again,immediately Pip stopped hugging Kay, so she didn't look like a "wuss" and started searching for were the sound came from while Kay was thinking.
On the ground there was a ditch, in the ditch there was Dash~who seemed to be chewing on something, beond that were trees,trees and you know what? More trees, but no sign of Diala so Pip thought she must of fled, but then there was another loud roar and it came from above them so they looked up,to their horror they saw a massive dragon towering over them, the beast was so huge it nearly blocked out the sun,(Diala) "I've always wanted to show you my little *pet* Dayrikuu,you know his teeth are so sharp you wouldn't feel a thing coz' you'd already be dead! Ha Ha Ha!"
(Kay) "Oh shut up already no one cares what you have to say, and you think thats funny!?!? My pet rock is more funny than you." Diala was very surprised by what she said even Pip was, Because she's always nice-a plan, this must be part of one of Kay's plan.
(Kay) "Can we get this over, I can't stand to see your uglyness,it's too much to deal with."
(Pip whispering *giggling*) "Hehe so whats your plan?"
(Kay whispering) "I'll tell you all in good time, right now though, we have to survive."
Diala was so angrey her face started to go red, as she waved her fists in the air fiercely
(Diala) "I was gonna kill you by Dayrikuu breathing fire in your net, but now i'm gonna torcher you with Dayrikuu's sharp claws." Thrashing thunderously Dayrikuu lanched his claws at Pip and Kay.
All the way on the left side of the net were Pip and Kay (Kay)"On the count of three we run all da way to da left of the net,one-" Dayrikuu was no more than four meters away "Two-" He was so close they could smell his revolting fish breath "THREE!" Pip and Kay just got out in time, leaving Dayrikuu breaking the net off.Pip and Kay flew out of the net (Pip)"...Soo what do weh do now?" (Kay)"Ummm we... Well i guess we could keep flying till he gets tired..." (Pip)"I gu-" But before Pip could finish her sentence Dayrikuu swooped behing them just missing their heads (Kay)"Woah-Com'on lets go" Pip and Kay were side by side as the wind carried them(Pip)"This is a piece of cake." (Kay)"Hmmm talking about cake-" Kays tummy rumbled (Pip)"Don't worry after this is over-wich it will be soon i mean Dayreka should be tired now- We can get something to eat." (Kay) "Err Pip, its DayrIkUU not DayrEkA" (Pip) "Yeah sure whatever"
But as they got deeper in the forest the wind stopped blowing and the sky went darker
12:04
Dayrikuu was gaining on them,their wings were tired and stiff of all the flying,they felt like they haven't eaten in weeks and as they thought it couldn't get worst...It did.
(Pip)"*Wheeze* K..Kay... *huff* dead... *phew* end..."
(Kay)"*Puff* W-wha'! *hugh*-"
Their heads felt dizzy as they fell to the ground...
Everything was spinning in a blur....
*THUD* Pip and Kay opened their eyes and looked up, Dayrikuu fell head first into the ground making Diala fall into some mud (Diala)"Oh you mindless salanmander,*spit* You made me get mud all over my clothes. Just go,and I NEVER want to see you ever again!" She croaked,wiping the mud out of her eyes.Though the dragon thought she ment it and flew off.(Diala)"No wait don't go!" But it was already to late Dayrikuu had left.Then in the distanst, Pip and Kay heard clip-cloping.At first Dash was a tiny blue speck but as she came nearer she was more clear then she came closer and closer they could see her holding something in her mouth...A purple bag with a white skull....Pip's bag!
As soon as Dash came, she emtied the bag and out came coconut sandwiches.The sweet smell of coconut filled the air and immediately Pip and Kay stuffed the sandwiches in their mouths hungerily (Kay)"Hey wait a sec *munch* I thought there were nun san- *munch* ichez left *munch* hmmm these are goood...Errr....Yeah so why?" (Dash)"Well when you were in the net,Pip's bag dropped and fell in the ditch I was stuck in, then after a while of trying to get out of the ditch I noticed a little tree stump and I thought i could use Pip's bag as a whip, so I swung it around the tree stump and-after a while- I finally got out of the ditch. Now it was a while since you ate, so I whipped up some sandwiches and put that in Pip's bag." (Kay)" What did you eat?" (Dash)"I had some sandwiches when I went inside" Pip searched in the bag and found the chocolate bars that they hadn't eaten (Pip)"Thanks for not eating the chocolate bars" (Dash) "Sure" (Dash thinking to herself)"I have no idea what she is talking about" (Pip)"So do ya have a home we can stay at for a while?" She said swinging her bag over her shoulder (Dash)"sure hop on and i'll take you there"
12:16
(Dash)"We're here." Dash stopped and Pip & Kay jumped of her. The house Dash lived in was quite small. The house was light blue colour with white stripes. Inside the house there was a table (with four chairs), an oven, a sink and an other door, beond that door there was a room and a comfey looking bed, next to the bed was a closet, on top of the closet were three sleeping bags. (Dash)"Oh you can use those sleeping bag's by the way. Just ask me if you need anything i'll be in the kitchen making lunch."
13:22
After lunch Pip and Kay were full so they made their beds and got ready to take a nap. (Pip)"I know everything is gonna be finnee Kay ;)." (Akorath)"Oh do you?" Said Akorath staring into a crystal ball "Just you wait...Just you wait.." (Diala)" WAIT!?!? Can't you do-whatever it is- sooner?" (Akorath)"All in good time, but right now I need to build my killer robot, the Arkav MWA HAHAHAHA!"
~Fin~
Good job Catlover~ was a fun read.
feels little random to me though... had little hard following what was going on,
could just be me though. *mew
PS: i look forward to what everyone will write.
besides from Catlover & Doom I've not heard( Far as story planing goes)
from the others in a while.
I see the story is still going on well though looking at the last one by Catlover that kinda got confusing after the thud, you right the names partly like scripted and also put the text in speech bubbles in the middle of a sentence like a normal story, which looks really confusing to me.
Maybe this will explain it better
It started off fine then suddenly we had those things in the middle of a sentence, that type of writing is fine when it's set out as a script like
ELSA: Hello
SOZO: Hello
Rather than
Elsa sees sozo ELSA "Hello"
Sozo looks round and notices Elsa has just spoken to her SOZO "Hello"
That's kinda where it eventualy went after the thud section and it's really hard to follow
Yoho it's been ages~
Well seems all my writers left for vacations or got bored or just forgot.
well not sure what this means. to be honest everyone's story has not gone very far yet
and some have not started at all... it be very easy for me to just take whoever
off the writers list and just write off everyone's characters
so people who may join this game later won't have to worry about
writing characters from people who are not even here anymore.
Or even i could start this whole thing over and just put out a edited version
of what i have already made. but if people keep showing no interest. I'll just have this topic closed.
*mew
I'm still here, but others need to write first.
:(
just subscribing. don't mind me :)
well not that i have any new story to add...
still waiting for my writers to come back or wait for new writers.
plus I'm planing on rewriting some things later as i got new character designs for my girls.
Woah, sorry for the loooong wait. Yea it would be fantastic to make a Chao Online, I simply LOVE chaos! I had a white sonic chao that ran like sonic cause its running was so high! Also id like to join!
cute, i liked it :)Quote:
Originally Posted by catlover
I like it aswell :p I also came here by clicking on the cat sig you had XD