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Put over 300 hours into my 3 levels.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xLg2hPefRJk
Pirate adventure has a giant pirate ship, that is 80% of the level and it moves! plus a Boss Octopus that needs to be defeated!
If you like this, you will love my "Temple of Fire" Level, and my "LBP1 - PS3 Fun" Level.
Thanx for checking it out!
Hi Swav331
Going to type some of this as I play..... first off, GREAT pirate, NOW crytisisms, the back ground is a little plain, that was my first impression, the second, though slight is, though you went to the effort of making your own picture of the octopus, you took the photo in create mode and so can see all the connecting logic wires, not sure if you see that as a problem, but thought i'd point it out.
LOL at the jumping fish onto the boat, but why didn't you make their feet invisible? (most materials will go invisible if you make them small enough, try using wood, as this is fairly strong.)
The boat was very 'unboat like', perhaps call it a raft?
Not sure I like the double life save point at the rolling electrified barrel things, i used them all up here and had to start again...perhaps an infinite save?
Lol, at the crabs......though feeling a little sea sick with the ships motion.
Really liked the bomb part.
Mini game 'in game' with the pushing the timmer bombs was cool.
Great octopus fight, maybe make the bolts invisible though?
Maybe consider getting the pirates of the carabian DC to get REAL water, this would give it a more realistic feel.
FANTASTIC platforming bit with the 'C' shaped bit rolling down the slope, very cool idea.
Ok, finished....some great ideas there, and game play was just about right for its difficulty, all my 'points' are concerning the look of the game really, and that's where it was let down for me. How much thermo have you got left (I'm guessing not much due to its size)
If you could make the scenery more interesting you'd have a really great game, good platforming and puzzles though, GREAT effort! (I gave you four stars)
If you could F4F my level 'House of the flying diggers' (link bellow) I'd appreciate your views in turn.
Shade seeker.
Thanx for all that input. For some reason, I do not have the option to make the Spawn points infinite. Wish I could change it but it wont let me, but I guess that makes it that much more of a difficult level. Yes I do not have the water, and like you said it would be cool to have it in there, so Ill get on that. As far as look and feel of the level, it is overheated, so I cannot add anymore. The crabs and the giant octopus took up wayyyy to much.
I will log on now and check out your level. Thanx for all that helpful info, and input. If you like that level you might also like the Temple Level I made which is much "prettier" as far as looks go. Alot more time went into that level.
Ill check out your levels and heart them. Thanx again. And if you could promote my levels, spread the word, i will build more and make em better and better. Thanx again.
So i checked out your level, and I have to say you put great amount of time into detail. Great story, and great puzzles. Some were little bit confusing but after few moments it all made sense. Unfortunelty...never got to finish the level cause at one point (after i crossed the "leap of Faith" and faught "eva" from WALLY lol, me and the other kid playing jumped into sum whole where it had some competition...and we both ended up dying, and ended up at the begining of the level....after which we could no longer cross the leap of faith bridge because it was down...and would not go up (my guess is cause the robot wasnt there?) might want to have it lock in place once it is fully up....
I wanted to finish it, but i was short on time, and it would take a while to do all the puzzles again, but I will definetly finish it up soon.
Overall great level, and great story.
I hearted the level.
Hey, m8, first of all, aren't pirate games illegal? ;)
(Oh wait....that's Pirated. :p)
Secondly, During F4F, the feeedback is usually posted on the thread of the level you're giving feedback on, otherwise if the creator doesn't check your thread again, he will not see it, and may get angry for a "lack of feedback," not to mention it also helps their thread, and fits better in there than yours, you know? ;)
Oh, and double-posting (posting twice in a row) is kinda frowned upon as well, m8, just a friendly reminder so you don't get in trouble for it in the future. :)
Hope that helps!