Originally Posted by
UmJammerSully
I really suck at giving feedback to music (especially with mixing and mastering), but by Joe, I'll have a good bash at it anyways...
You have some fairly standard quality VST's here, but they do the job without being intrusive with the exception of the buzz sounds at the very beginning (not sure how you acheived those sound). I thought the synth sounds were hit and miss with the synth introduced at 1:02 being one of the better ones. The strings, whilst brief were pretty superbThe sample source was pretty funny by the way, and an interesting source to sample, however I felt a lot of those voice-over bits felt a little random and slapped in there with no purpose. That being said, I don't think they do any harm either. Would be cool if you could cut the phrases up word by word and did some clever rhythmic stuff with them, but not essential as you already have a cool track here.
More than anything, I really like how this track flows between the different sections and definitely has a proggy (we'll pretend that's an actual word) sort of feel, definitely held my interest right until the end. The drum sounds and arrangement are definitely above decent too, did you sample them or are they VST, soundfont or what? All the parts are blended together really well other than the samples I mentioned earlier too. Can't think of much else to say other than "Good job"! My favourite section was 2:14. ;P