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hello guys, im new, and i want to present my first level created in lbp, if you can give me advice on how to improve it I am grateful .
sorry but the photos are little old, in new version i make much graphic uodate
http://id.lbp.me/img/bl/41d119ce701e...dab226d62a.png
http://i0.lbp.me/img/ft/9a04fe7c922f...944e8a3526.jpg
http://ie.lbp.me/img/ft/0be05639e6ca...037f835ac5.jpg
http://lbp.me/v/xtzsb0
Thank you for your attention :)
I add F4F option :)
play my level F4F http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...-1-to-4-player
Your level has to be the best use i've ever seen of sackbots and bounce pads. beautiful and very humous.
if you can, rig it to end with player appearing near scoreboard and have the sackbot in 1 player come up and sack differnt things to you depending on player's score
Looking foreword to that, try my sims level,
The sims
Here's a forum post if you want to post messages there. http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...50499-The-Sims
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Originally Posted by TSFRJ
thank's , i try to make your good idea, i try your level and i leave feedback! very fun!!!! need little more speed bost ;)
ok that was a cool level,
let me help you a bit to make it even more better!
at first, i wonder why the thing with the batterie at the beginning? sure its a funny thing and looks good, but only one time. if you want to start over from the beginning it gets annoying as sad as it sounds.
second thing is, why do you give points with point bubbles? don't you know there is a point giver tool in game? simply connect it when it gets destroyed :)
[EDIT: yes i know you wanted to look who's better at catching the points, but that is NO fun in my eyes, it's frustrating. better do the point giver tool and make the game endless. and instant win if you lose so you can see on the highscore who made it longer.]
third i must say i missed a life counter like showing the player how many times he can die befor it is game over. - and why even game over? we want to win and upload our highscores!
[EDIT: AH, i see the lifebar now!, but it is out of screen for my older TV...]
develop this level further and try to get a professional look ingame and you got chances for a mm pic. but you have to work for that a little bit more. but it's worth it belive me!
i hope i helped you abit :3
greetings and hug
~FW
PS: if you do F4F: http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...zle-Fusion-4.0
thank you!
Thank you for your valuable advice, I already made some changes that I have suggested. I added the rankings even if you do not destroy all the blocks, but there will be a very sad sackbot, while those who take all the blocks will have a happy sackbot! I like the idea of bubbles for points in a way that the game is more difficult! I also added a digital counter for lives left!Quote:
Originally Posted by ForcesWerwolf
I need little help, i want to' give more time in the ranking zone, how i can?
I try your level! It's amazing!
I try it! Good ideaQuote:
Originally Posted by PerfectlyDarkTails
Really great level. Lots of fun and well made.
A few suggestions.
1) More levels. I did not really want to stop when I did :p (Thats a real positive)
2) Maybe later on you could add different coloured blocks that maybe you have to hit more than once.
3) Power ups (Longer spring board / extra life / 2 stuntmen)
I used to love this game when I was younger.
I will keep my eye out for any updates on this one.
Very amusing use of a sackbot lol I had a smile the whole time.
I think the battery at the begging was a nice touch, but maybe
use a tag on the battery and a tag sensor instead of the red switch.
As I barely had to put the battery in it's place to hit the switch.
Not really an issue at all as it doesn't affect anything in the level really
but I wanted to try to offer some sort of idea. different fromt he ones above
already said. I will show this level to my friends they will get a kick out of it. xD
Aloha
Thank's to all! I just working on NeXT big update, little graphic change, bubble with various power up, and much more improvements! Stay tuned :)
Hi! I try to' follow a lot of yours advice and finally i finish the version 2.0 with much improvements, Now with power bubbles you can shot missile and much moore! Please try my new version and task to' my if you find a Bug! Now with 4 different level! F4F for all
On list soon review :) i have like 16371298 (lol) levels to play :D
Its a very good version of this game, with a sackboy as the ball lol! imaginitive! <3'd good job, I only had one question, after I clear the first bunch of bricks, do I not get points for clearing the 2nd round? I don't believe I got a single point for it :(
Thank's ! I check it and fix it in the NeXT relase, now i working on 2 player version!Quote:
Originally Posted by reiko57
New image from last level :)
http://i3.lbp.me/img/ft/b732953c11c7...ee3056c223.jpg
Played it and i liked.. thos the controler turns to fast :P we need more levels ^^
Thank's for playing ! I just fix the speed and the point counter! I work to add new very hard level :)
Played the level and had a few suggestions.. maybe add some powerup to slow down the sackbot when launching him. Maybe could do this by adjusting the bounce pad. Otherwise good job :)
I just queued it, please check out my level
http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...eo-coming-soon)