One of Gilburts friends is about to learn the lesson of leaving a hungy idiot alone with food.
My first try at a film, Enjoy!
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One of Gilburts friends is about to learn the lesson of leaving a hungy idiot alone with food.
My first try at a film, Enjoy!
hi there :) watched your film!
+++:
- cool idea for a film!
- nice actings! well done!
- you can feel his thoughts
- i smiled atthe purple stickers, and the idea with the hiding
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- censored text
- a bit short, ends very fast unexpected
ideas:
- i think a zoom at his face while the grumbling stomach would be funny :)
- try to add a bit more on the end. a fitting end :) like a joke or something - maybe somehow he wins free dinner for two somewhere while trying to hide. get found and they eat together happy.
rating:
- yay
F4F:
i think my F4F level is a bit long... but if you got the time it would be very nice if you would review it :)
it is called skunk bunny adventures and it is linked in my singature! thank you :)
~Forces
Thanks for the review! I have fixed up the word Grape being censored and have made it all look better, I will Q your level up and play it today :D.
I like your idea, Maybe ill add something like that at the end, like he finds some grapes in the trash or somehthing :p.
Hey, this thread should have way more reviewws!! I mean, your sketchNZ for crying out loud! ANYWAY, it sounds good, I still haven't finished Story Mode but I'll check out this little flm as soon as I can, if I don't reply in the next 5 days just send me a message! EDIT: great level Sketch! it had me and my little brother laughing like maniacs, the house was cool,and ou did some great angling of the cameras, I would have liked it to be longer but that's fine, it was a great little movie, can't wait to see more from you on the PS3. 5 stars from me.