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This is my first level. I know its short, but I'm still learning. If you like it let me know.
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Queued up, I'll check it out when I get home from work (about 8-9 hours from now). Looks good!
Queued, will check it out soon. Here's my level, would like some feedback (I have a thread up also, you can respond in that one).
http://lbp.me/v/zzm3ge
Queued, Ill make sure to try it out soon :)
Hello,
I've tried your level, and for a first level, it's awesome. It's maybe short, but it's a really good and fun platformer, with beautifull sceneries. The level looks really great, was fun to play, I cannot see any flaw here.
Good job !
If you have the time to look at my level for F4F, here is the link.
Oh Yeah!
This is one of those hidden away levels that deserves far more attention! But it's a bit on the short side.. Would love to see more.
(maybe that's why it is short, to make us want more..)
Extremely detailed and beautifully crafted. I lol'ed at the goats. Good Work!
See sig for F4F.
Just went through this level, and I'm glad my Sunday started this good.
Hammertoe_1, excellent job! Motion physics of the game is calculated very carefully, cameras are perfect, lighting is just right, I love all those little details, like green ivy with a few life leaves and either flowers or berries (those little red ones), like usage of natural looking types of wood.... Those goats are super!))) You must be an artist to draw like that))))... Oh, I found the right word for this level: AR-TIS-TIC!)))))
Your first level!?! Those screenshots look terrific! I already have it qued. Expect a nice juicy heart if your screenshots hold up to their promises ;)
Also, can you check out my latest masterpiece? It's a cover of the Rise Against song "Re-Education" and I think I've got it pretty much nailed perfectly You be the judge of that though lol http://lbp.me/v/z4zhf7
Thank you very much. It's short cause I don't know how to conserve thermo well. Trying to do that on part 2. We'll see how that goes.Quote:
Originally Posted by Discosmurf
A little tip on how to improve your post a little(as well as little bump to get more attention for your lvl):
Instead of placing links to your LBP.me pics that people have to click, place the URL as a pic in the post either by using the Image button on the editor or use the [img] your url here [/img] command.
It will look more inviting and hopefully tempt more players.
Why do you excuse yourself its well looking I think Im going to play it
Thanks for the advice. It does look much better now. :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Discosmurf
Hammertoe_1, you are not only a good level creator, but also generous enough to share a wise advice. Thank you for doing it at my level, now I know there are some grammar mistakes in it. The only problem is, I'm not a native English speaker, therefore it's hard for me to see my own mistakes. Spell checkers are not grammar checkers, you know - they don't work in this case. So, could you be so kind as to become my friend and help me out with that, whenever it would be convenient for you. Because I feel dramatically embarrassed of the mistakes I've done.
Feedback
Rated: :)
Positives:
+3D mountains looked really good
+Enivironment of the level looked pretty good
+mountain goats were well made
+Platforming was pretty good
+Visuals looked good
Negatives:
-No negatives
That would be great. I'll replay the level when I have some time and offer you suggestions for the dialogue.Quote:
Originally Posted by Tinochka
:)
Pleasantly surprised here. Wouldn't have guessed it was your first level. Keep up the good work. Based on this, I could see you doing some pretty cool stuff.
wow, from the screenshots, you wouldn't guess it to be a first level. putting it in the queue. I hope to get to it this weekend.
Looks good. I'll Queue it up for later tonight-feedback will follow. F4F below.
J
This level is gorgeous, the goats are hilarious, platforming elements are fun, and I had a great time playing the level. I eagerly await a follow-on level. I hope this one continues to draw attention. My only suggestion is a better arrangement of respawn points, or more of them, as there were a couple times I died and had to retrace a lot of steps. Also, it looked like I could jump right from the goat who's thinking of a song (I think), and that leads to death, so maybe make it clearer not to go there.
The fun, funny, and exciting style of this level reminds me a bit of my Sacknight series. If you're interested, please check it out (links in signature below).
Beautiful level the mountains,the tents, the goats and the caves. I loved the rope ladders hanging it really gave that archeological vibe. Your earth was very cool looking as well.
I came across one thing though the second time through, the sackbot at the end didn't open the scoreboard until I talked to him again? The score bubbles are glued in place so they don't fall like they usually do, that's the only thing that could change. Awesome level, will be on the look out for part 2!
Try any of the levels from my signature if you like.