Phoenix burns bright, a comic im writing.
Im writing a comic book called "phoenix burns bright". I currently have most of the story in my head, but the comic pages arent done.
Would you like to hear some of the story? I bet you would.
Our story begins in a steampunk airship named O'blimpus
RINGARINGGGGGGG!!!!!
need heed: *head stuck inside pillow* five.... more..... minutes..... *puts clock on sleep mode*
our protagonist, need heed, a wierd furry creature with soft fur all around except for his head. he has three tufts of fur on his head, about as tall as a little tyke's basketball hoop (not counting the backboard) and is a vegetarian. he plays the clarinet.
need heed : * wakes up, yawns, scratches eyes* blehh, *runs to mirror and trims eartuffs* * takes shower and sings sleepyhead* *walks into living room*
bween and cubly: HAPPEH BURTDAI!!!!!!!!!!
bween and cubly are sortof need heeds family. they found him crashed on the ground and said "neh, you can come with us" bween is a red midget wale that plays the kalimba, and cubly is a wierd bee dude that flies with his antenna's.
need heed: its my birthday? Marvelous. bween, what did you make me.
bween: a orange and lemon cake!!!
need heed: O.O ill eat that later.
cubly: THERE. ARE. STARVING. PEOPLE. IN. INDIA. EAT IT!!!
need heed. >.> cubly, what did you get me?
cubly: *hands need heed a small present*
need heed: *rips it open* its a..... a broken clarinet reed?
cubly: well since you LOOVE nature and want to protect it, I tried to reuse something/
Need heed: >.> <.< *punches cubly* *runs and eats some cake* bween, what are you looking at?
bween: theres a bird....
need heed: seriously? a bird?
bween: its on fire, its like a phoenix.
need heed: * looks at it* hey, thats cool
bween: need?
need heed: we should get some pictures of this and send it to netscape or some other rumor website
bween: NEED HEED?
need heed: maybe we can get an interview on how it happened to fly here
bween: NEED HEED!!!!!!
need heed: WHAT!!!
bween: *shakingly points at phoenix*
need heed: OH CRAP! *phoenix shoots some sort of a fireball at the ship* *starts running it circles*
bween and needheed: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!
need heed: *starts to run to the driving station, but its on fire* I have to save meh family, *runs through fire and starts controlling, and hand catches on fire* ....... AHHHHHH MAH HANDS ON FIRE AHHHHHHH... wait, I cant feel it..... what the heck? im immune to fire...... THATS COOL!
*ship crashes into a mountain.*
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Nivisa: *hears big crashing noise*.... what the heck was that?
our protaganist, need heed, is in love with nivisa, shes a tad bit shorter than need heed, she loves to swim, has a bad attitude, and hates needheed.
nivisa: *grabs bucket of water and looks at whats outside.* hmm, whats this? * douses flames with water*
needheed: *pops out of pile of ash* umm..... I mean, Hello nivisa.
nivisa: Hello furby, what did you do today?
thats all im gonna write of it so far, what do you think of it?
