Hey, here's my in-depth (LOL - somewhat I guess) review of your level! Because you support F2F I kindly ask you to play my level in return:
http://lbp.me/v/cffp5-
Review:
The starting scene was REALLY amazing! Original and creative. After that though I was released from a small area into a HUGE place, and I felt very lost and not sure what to do!
After I got to the first DESCENT area with the fan at the top, I understood what to do. Hold the thing and let go ideally at the ARROW in order to grap the next thing. It was quite difficult though and there was a small gap for it to be done because the things move WAY to fast. Something I learnt from making levels, is through testing our own levels a bazillion times, we become super-pro's at our level and even come to find it hard to believe other people find certaing obstacles hard. But it really was quite hard!
The first area/obstacle set where you grab things with R1 could also do with some cosmetic changes because it's kinda box-ish right now.
I'm writing this LIVE as I play your level. And your second obstacle where you grab the cube to activate the jump pad in order to speed through a obstacle is prooving really difficult! And by the way, I've aced all the LBP1 and LBP2 levels so I know when it's hard! Cosmetically this area was very good but It took me at least 30 attempts to pass the first barricade thingy and to be honest I would usually have gotten very frsutrated and left after ten. And also, a lot of kids play this game who suck more than me. It's not getting to the Jump Pad thats hard but the jump pad was hardly taking me anywhere it felt, I would think to increase it's "height". After than dying on the other side due to lack of oxygen I realized it is easy to pass the first part if you use the MIDDLE of the jump pad, but because there is a sense of urgency created I was using the lowest part of it which is the quickest to get to, and I would think many players would do this to. Your level has 135 plays and 28 completes!!! So I think that unless you really meant for this level to be super-hardcore that you make it a bit easier! please!!!! =P
I than understood the pain of those 107 people and then also got super-frustrated and left!!!
But I cannot really take down a level based on it's difficulty, also I would suggest you make it easier, it is still mechanically/conceptually a very good level and cosmetically also a very good level. And so I have LIKED it and even HEARTED it so that perhaps when I can one day finish it LOL!
Anyways, sorry to say so again, but please F2F, my level is in the above link!