Marmalade the baked bean cat

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06-30-2012
Niki

Marmalade the baked bean cat

http://lbp.me/v/cck-30

http://i47.tinypic.com/10e3nsi.jpg

http://i48.tinypic.com/14ce9zb.jpg

Here is my new level inspiration by a short story called marmalade the baked bean cat made by Sonja Cheal. You should check it out here [http://www.short-stories.co.uk/ . Also thanks to Mnniska speed create videos they also help a lot with ideas:D.
hope everyone likes it! Enjoy~

http://lbp.me/v/cck-30
06-30-2012
biorogue

LOL, I'm diggin' the pics! queued.
06-30-2012
DaSpoony

That's the sort of name that will get anyone looking! Queuing on that basis :D
07-03-2012
Niki

haha thanks:D
07-03-2012
Twinsanity

Queued, I like the pics. :D
07-03-2012
aar2697

The music.. I love it. I like how it kind of sounds like a bunch of "meows" most of the song. The visuals are very colorful and are fitting for Marmalade. The platforming was very fun, but I got confused a little bit. I was tempted to jump down the ledges when you used the dark matter glitch a lot. There isn't much of a problem with that, but I'd like if you could make it more visible that you aren't able to jump down them. In the area with the attract-o-balls, I didn't realize they attract you. The area still functioned well, though. You designed the cats very well. Your theme is kept consistent 100% of the level, which many creators fail to do. Great job on that part. In the part where you use the bounce pads at the end of the ledge to pull down the sponge bridge, I didn't realize I had to do that at first. I continuously jumped down to the bounce pads that are supposed to get you to the bridge after you pull it down and got stuck. I had to pop myself. The baked beans were fun to get, especially the one where you have to shoot off the bounce pad to it in the middle of the air. Last, the story was kept 100% accurate to the short story. It felt just like the book. Overall, very good work with the level. With a few pointers in the level on what to do, I think this could be even better.
Here's my level (F4F): http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...50#post1020850
07-03-2012
Twinsanity

Great level, I really like the deign of the cats and the concept of the whole level. But the problem is that there were few checkpoints in the level. But overall I love it. :)
My level for F4F: http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...se-(VERY-HARD)
07-04-2012
xxMATEOSxx

I never read the story, or if I did, I don't remember it, but I still found this to be fun.
I like the enviorment you created and agree that it is good that you kept it consistent. The music was also a highlight for me.

With that said, here's just a couple of suggestions.

I think you should slow down the dialogue for when Marmalade introduces his name just a bit for a more comfortable read.
Also, even though you backed the switches with yellow stickers, the ones where you raise the platforms later in the level could still be a little tricky to notice if you don't know they're there.

Other than that, nice work on the gameplay and the level all around.
07-07-2012
Niki

Quote:

Originally Posted by aar2697

The music.. I love it. I like how it kind of sounds like a bunch of "meows" most of the song. The visuals are very colorful and are fitting for Marmalade. The platforming was very fun, but I got confused a little bit. I was tempted to jump down the ledges when you used the dark matter glitch a lot. There isn't much of a problem with that, but I'd like if you could make it more visible that you aren't able to jump down them. In the area with the attract-o-balls, I didn't realize they attract you. The area still functioned well, though. You designed the cats very well. Your theme is kept consistent 100% of the level, which many creators fail to do. Great job on that part. In the part where you use the bounce pads at the end of the ledge to pull down the sponge bridge, I didn't realize I had to do that at first. I continuously jumped down to the bounce pads that are supposed to get you to the bridge after you pull it down and got stuck. I had to pop myself. The baked beans were fun to get, especially the one where you have to shoot off the bounce pad to it in the middle of the air. Last, the story was kept 100% accurate to the short story. It felt just like the book. Overall, very good work with the level. With a few pointers in the level on what to do, I think this could be even better.
Here's my level (F4F): http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...50#post1020850

Thanks I appreciate your feedback ill check on your level soon
and I'm glad you liked it!

and thank you all for the feedback i will F4F on your levels