Kiwi VS Orange - The Tournament (Level 2 - Above Da Toksick Skai)

I Just finished My second part of my series. Probably will be 6 parts...
Please tell me what you guys think!
Now players can skip the cutscene. (thanks very much, rought-tea)
I want to know if you can understand the story, please, because I'm not good on making cutscenes. Sorry for my bad english.

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Anyway, here is the link:
http://vita.lbp.me/v/-6yx6

Thanks! :p

I'm...
feeling...
ALONE.

:(

whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?
Why?
My printer is broken. :(

Because anyone want to review my level. This makes me sad because I did put a lot of effort on it.
And my printer is broken too.
:(

Someone reviewed it already :P
All I can do is add it to my queue- I have to sort some things out first......

:D Thanks! One person reviewed my level, not the story. I am worried the most about the story than worried about the gameplay( I still wanting reviews about gameplay yet) . Thansk for queing!

Yeah well, i enjoyed your first Level, but this is far more superior and not as hectic as the first one. It has a really unique art style, it just looks good and atmospheric imo. It has very fun gameplay elements... im actually really suprised by the levels quality... it was really fun to play.

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Now players can skip the cutscene. (thanks very much, rought-tea)
I want to know if you can understand the story, please, because I'm not good on making cutscenes. Sorry for my bad english.

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It allways good to give the option to skip cutscenes.... i watched it anyways and i dont think u are bad at making cutscenes...

As long what i understood the story is something like this:

Spoiler - Story

... after the girl got graded with a tripple F, she got closed away... and the most strong person of the planet stepped into solving whats going on....

Have to say if u make 6 Levels of this, its gonna be pretty epic.... although i have to say im more about the gameplay, than the story, lol, but i understand it.

If you'd like you can submit the story to me and I can help edit your story for the next ones.
I actually preferred the first one over the second one- and I was shocked that I received a fail for my efforts! This time I'll probably get an incomplete. I got stuck in the part where this star appears spinning around...I had no idea what I was supposed to do....... I get stuck often...

Hi everyone ! :)
Great job ! I tried your 2 levels... and they're pretty nice ! The story is fun and the cinematics well done, the gameplay is innovative too ! I enjoyed the first level, especially when the "toxic floor" is growing up and we have to escape as fast as possible ! The background of the second level is well detailed, I also liked your creations (the red/blue bounce pads, the one-wheel vehicles...). The touch-screen function is well used too.
I can't wait for the next part of "Kiwi VS Orange" ! :p

You just need to grab the sponge...
How could you get stuck there?
:(

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It allways good to give the option to skip cutscenes.... i watched it anyways and i dont think u are bad at making cutscenes...


Is not that I'm bad at making cutscenes... Is that I'm bad in telling stories!

As long what i understood the story is something like this:


OH YEAH! You understood it correctly! YEAH!
Thanks, rought! I love when you review one of my levels! :D
I have played your levels too and their are very good, but I don't like reviewing because I suck at english, lol.



Hi everyone !
Great job ! I tried your 2 levels... and they're pretty nice ! The story is fun and the cinematics well done, the gameplay is innovative too ! I enjoyed the first level, especially when the "toxic floor" is growing up and we have to escape as fast as possible ! The background of the second level is well detailed, I also liked your creations (the red/blue bounce pads, the one-wheel vehicles...). The touch-screen function is well used too.
I can't wait for the next part of "Kiwi VS Orange" !

How can I put quotes?
anyway, thanks for reviewing! I feel so happy when someone reviews it... ;P

If you'd like you can submit the story to me and I can help edit your story for the next ones.
I actually preferred the first one over the second one- and I was shocked that I received a fail for my efforts! This time I'll probably get an incomplete. I got stuck in the part where this star appears spinning around...I had no idea what I was supposed to do....... I get stuck often...

You just need to grab the sponge...
How could you get stuck there?
:(

Hey Cakito

The gameplay in your level really is stunning. You have an great knack of coming up with clever and original ideas for gameplay mechanics and/or obstacles. I loved it. It really is engaging stuff - keeps you on your on your toes with not a dull moment. Seriously, awesome :)

I did have a couple of issues, though. Like catsand, the first time I got to the section with the bouncepads moving upwards and the star in ether where there's an arrow, I just reached a dead end as I had got onto the platform below without grabbing both sponges. There's nothing to tell you that you need to grab both sponges and if you don't, you're just left hanging around in the sky waiting for something to happen. Luckily for me, eventually I jumped and tried to grapple onto the star. I fell down and by sheer luck grabbed the sponge which released the crate thingies. I think a bit more direction for the player would be helpful there.

The other place I had real problems was the section at the end with the rail tracks which you have to move up and down. They just WOULD NOT stay put where I had moved them. If I used touch to pull the track down it would just spring back up as I was travelling over the track (squishing me against the ceiling at the top). I tried countless times until for some random reason it worked - by which time I had lost almost all my points. The same thing happened when I replayed but then I worked out that I could skip part of that section and walk along the top of the level to the left and drop down into the tube section... The tracks are an awesome idea but they just don’t seem to work properly or fairly in my experience of playing twice.

Other than that though, loved it :)

Bugs MUST DIIIIE!
Now I killed all the bugs!
The level are free of bugs!! YAY!
Thanks for all of you that reviewed My level! :D