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Gameplay was very simple but i really liked the character and the atmosphere. The dialog was excruciatingly slow! Even for someone like me who struggles a little with english. Other than that it was a very enjoyable and relaxing experience, good work.
Its queued. The name sounds good
Nice visuals and a kind main character.
The level is too short to tell a story: after entering when the fox introduced me into the story I thought: "Oh great, a story platformer. And look how beautiful the design is."
One minute later I reach the scoreboard and the fox say: "Thank you".
......Ewwww, for what? ;)
Nice level which could be a great level, if it would be longer :)
wow. how about put a little more effort into advertising your level. all you did was post a link and you expect people to just jump up and play your level. You have to "sell" your level to the reader, entice them to play it. Add pictures, add a brief description, add some. thing.
This is my first advertisement on here so i really don't know how to do much
Hi Caliboy,
every beginning is hard and I remember my first time to showcase a level and if I wouldn't have some help from some friends then... :)
I only can recommend you to busy yourself with that point because this has a lot of influence on how your levels will be noticed and how many gamers will play it and give reviews! A first start could be to read following hints in this thread:
http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...For-Dummies%29
And also have a look on other showcased levels, this could be a good orientation! If you have questions then feel free to ask!^^
And now I've queued your level and I will give you a feedback when I#ve played it!^^
Many greetings, Jürgen^^
P.S. Using the edit-function you can do additional changes in your thread!^^ :)
I've got very few problems how a level is presented to me; in the end what matters is content although I do enjoy a small backstory to it all or one image or two! :p Anyways, I already had this puppy queued up and I will make sure to provide my feedback once I play it! :)
Hi Caliboy,
you've created a nice level, I love the atmosphere!^^ The story should be more elaborated, it's like chocolate that someone holds before your nose and you're not allowed to taste it!^^ I would be rather curious to know why and what!^^ And another point: I would have wished to have more checkpoints! (But maybe because I'm old and a little bit awkward!)
Many greetings, Jürgen^^