Proluge to Gunslinger(On Hold due to lack of credit Card for MGS pack)

The Typical redemption story.

Done to death and dull...

Yet, can be done if it's interesting.

So....

We Start on a Cargo Train(Dusty Cargo's to be exact, serving desert areas for over 300 years!), where a group of transients are huddled over a small fire in a empty carriage.

Well, except our main character.

The Drifter.

In exile for crimes we do not know, he seeks redemption, even isolating himself from the other travelers.

But he know's his final destination.

Grave Alley.......

http://lbp.me/v/qnkc22z

Here's a link to your level:
http://lbp.me/v/qnkc22z

It can't be viewed from here because you have chosen not to publish your information on the web on LBP.me.

if this is on hold "due to lack of credit card for MGS" then shouldn't this be in the "ideas and projects" area?
I'll queue it up though and check it out. Just confused.