Middle Eastern romp

[Frozen50]

Middle Eastern romp by Frozen50
Just a short, simple platforming level, with nice detail.


Hey, new here. I usually like to put a lot of work into my levels, but have found that they never get more than a dozen or so plays, and nothing else I do can get more plays. Instead of sinking down to the level of spamming level comments with "pls play my lvl", I decided to come here.

Just finished a little thing I started yesterday, and decided to post it here.

It's a simple platforming level. Nothing fancy. The biggest thing it's got going for it is some nice detail, which is something I enjoy doing most in LBP
So yeah, as far as depth goes, it doesn't have much. If you want that, perhaps check out my level "Watchful eyes" :P

But yes, I do plan on being as active as I can in the community. I'd be happy to help anyone if they need anything, and I intend to check out plenty of all of your levels here.


Here's a few screens of my new level:






Comments appreciated

[warlord_evil]

I just played the level, and the detail was great, but the level overall seemed empty.
-You should try to add more objects like curtains, carts, plants, and lights.
-There was no sound effects, I think you should add wind ambient or something.
-You should really add a background, it would add so much more to the level!
-It could be a little longer, and maybe have a story.
-You should add more gameplay than jumping, maybe dodging and leaping?

4 stars and a heart.

[Frozen50]

I just played the level, and the detail was great, but the level overall seemed empty.
-You should try to add more objects like curtains, carts, plants, and lights.
-There was no sound effects, I think you should add wind ambient or something.
-You should really add a background, it would add so much more to the level!
-It could be a little longer, and maybe have a story.
-You should add more gameplay than jumping, maybe dodging and leaping?

4 stars and a heart.

Yes, all very true. Thank you for the constructive criticism.

I didn't really put much polish into this level, I guess. Oh well, there will be better things in the future.

Thanks again.

[Jagrevi]

Looks good - I'll give it a shot later.