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    Life (Introduction) by Shhabbazz
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    I've been working on this level for only a couple days, so it's not great, but the sequels will be amazing. this contains ages 7-19, Which is not usually when people die, so it's fairly easy.


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    Please give me ideas for ages 20-30

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    find it pleease

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    Calm down, man. I just played this, and it's a really cool concept for a survival challenge. Seriously, this was really awesome. It may not be as deep as I thought it was have been going in to it, it's still a survival challenge, but this is really cool. The whole concept of choice is something that's never really been touched upon in survival challenges , except maybe in that one Miglioshin level. In terms of visuals, I'm not gonna lie and say it looked "good", but it looked good enough. I love the level and the concept. Keep it up. Oh, and make it so that you have to get a key at the end of the level to continue on in the survival challenge. Give us something to work towards. Also, how are you a police officer putting down a terrorist organization at 13? lol

    5 stars and a heart. Make another one. Keep it up. This level is excellent.

    Oh, and could you play my F4F level, WaffleWorld Prologue?
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    Yeah I'll play it... lol you're 16 when you get in the car.... If you look closely after the first building but yeah I know, a little young

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    It's a very interesting concept. I really do like the idea. I did think was random to be a police office at 13! I liked the humor in it too.

    My thoughts on how you could improve was to try and up the visuals a bit. They were ok but you could probably go back and add in some details. The school house was just an empty room, try adding some desks and chairs!

    I also thought the challenges could be better. I found that most of it was really easy or almost no challenge then you get to the terrorist hideout and it's now very hard. I can understand having a level that gets progressively more difficult but work on that curve.

    Overall I thought the level was good. I think by uping some of the visuals and gameplay it could be great!

    If you could check out my newest level, Puzzolors that would be great.

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    ok kool thanks! I will try your level

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    It was a funny level a intresting idea for 16 i would give the play a paint gun so they can kill the turret. When you are seven you could have the fire blocks fall down in attempt to kill the player.

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    oh, I thought there was a paint gun... my bad

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    20-30 get married and evil ninjas attack the chaple...haha jk but u could do the married part
    If olny eyes were actually pies........

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    I got to the terrorist hideout and quit. The concept was good, but it was easier than easy and the visuals were just BAD.
    2/10

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    Quote Originally Posted by UltimateClay View Post
    I got to the terrorist hideout and quit. The concept was good, but it was easier than easy and the visuals were just BAD.
    2/10
    Can you test 20-30 for me and see if I improved the visuals because I think i did

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    Im sort of agreeing with ultimate clay here, im not gonna sugar coat it like everybody else. It needs some serious visual overhaul and a lot more detail.
    Example- When your in detention, or school for that matter, make it look like a school. Have a chalkboard, desks, some other kids in detention.
    Also, work on making age appropriate tasks. Why am i being asked to kill someone at like 8? Lmao.

    I gave 2 stars, needs work.
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    I honestly think the other guys are being a bit harsh - but you DO need to improve visuals. Content as people may be with solid gameplay and concepts I think for this to be a hit you NEED to improve visuals - why not take a look at some of Steve_big_guns' lvls? The visuals are fantastic, but they are really just put down to detail - and two hours work on a lvl is frankly, not enough.
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