Well...i actually made a demo/concept level for this allready but i would really like every one to tell me what i can do better.

Story:

You are jus a recruit on the ship "The Vash MKII" But there is a problem, your ship is suddenly getting hurled into a different planet because yout auto-steering is malfunctioning. You are the only survivor, you are introduced into this whole new world and you have no clue if there is life on the planet. The mission/Point of this whole game is that your looking for life and possibaly stuff to fix your ship.

sorry if its a short plot im tryin to expand on it more. I would actually try to make this into Three different chapters.

Chapter One: The Crash
Chapter Two: Where Am I?
Chapter Three: Life?

If anyone is interested or would actually try and help me i would really appreatiate it. But i do have school for another week until Easter Break for me so starting on Friday around four i possibaly would have time to work on this.