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    Default Hearts For Heroes Prologue - Moonlight Bay

    Hearts For Heroes Prologue - Moonlight Bay by TOBSn08
    This is where the Adventure starts...

    I feel like I havent published anything for a Year, but this is about to change right now
    so I proudly present:

    Hearts for Heroes Prologue - Moonlight Bay (which is actually not Part 1; Part 2 is Swampa and is already published)

    H4HP-MB is where my little Story starts.
    Unfortunately you have lost your mind and youve got no idea where you are, who you are and what you are doing.
    Could be better so, because now you can fokus your mind on becoming a Heart Hunter and meeting the queen.
    But before you can enter Sky Kingdom, you must prove your skills in the Moonlight Caves...



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    Featuring:

    - OMG WTF REAL WATER!!!11
    - this Level is more a Puzzler, with some "raise and sink"-Water elements
    - 2 two-Player Parts

    For those who find the secret Area, please write the code in this thread, better be fast

    If you wonder yourself, what part 1 will look like, take a look at this:

    Last edited by TOBSn08; 04-12-2010 at 05:47 PM.

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    Wow, I'm super excited!
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    Definitely interesting - I'll give this one a play in a few hours or so.

    I was actually looking at your profile recently (I was looking for an old level called A.I.R. - I couldn't remember who made it, but I still had a prize from it and it had your name on it).

    One of those screenshots certainly has my interest piqued. I'll give it a play.

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    Looks really nice, I'll check it out sometime.

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    Heart For what... ?? Oh, Heroes. Um, I had read something else

    I'll check this out ! The last screen amazed me.

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    checked it out...level is broken...at the part where the ship flies...it hits a cloud at the top and gets stuck...and nothing else happens...you are too far to jump to the land nearby and your ship cannot move at all...there is no way to continue the level at all..shame too because the visuals are nice and all...

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    Wow, looks amazing! Going to check it out right now.

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    I absolutely LOVE your levels! They have some of the best and most wild platforming and gameplay elements. Not many creators can match your latest levels. They're just amazing! Keep them coming! I'm really enjoying the storyline so far!!



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    This was amazing... until I got stuck The cloud made the flying boat stop moving. It looked amazing though. If you fix this it will be great!

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    Yep same here - boat totally got stuck in the cloud and I couldn't finish. Excellent level up to that point. Post when you get it sorted and I'll happily play it again.


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    to be honest idk if this would kill it but i would suggest just extending a plank or something for you to walk on or some swings or something

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    The screenshots look amazingly fun and detailed I'm excited for the week to come so I can play all this

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    Dang, i was mad to see that this was broken because I wanted to play it right now. Swampa is one of my favorite levels so I was pretty excited to see the sequel (even though its actually a prequel). Oh well, I guess I'll play it tomorrow after you fix it.

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    You can still play 99% of it. It's right before the scoreboard that it gets stuck.


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    Um, I played it yesterday (and I loved it by the way ), and I didn't face any bug. But I was just... surprised to see how people rated it, and what kind of tags they left behind after playing it.

    I just loved it, and I'm looking forward to playing the sequel ^^

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    TOBSn08=instant classic

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    Great level, loved the inventive puzzles and the ship. There were a few parts which could've been corner edited better, but it looked great.

    Improve:

    1. The eyes and magic mouths dotted around. I'd maybe put them on a thin layer face or something. Not sure though. Liked the talking trees though

    2. The part where the ship flies at the end. The rockets didn't look that nice on the ship. I'd maybe put masts on the side of the ship(kinda like wings) that sway a little bit(like they're caught in the wind)

    3. The door on the ship at the end that "traps" you in the little room while the ship is flying. It doesn't look that nice. I'd maybe make 2 rectangle doors that move horizontally(like doors on a lift)
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    Thanks for the Feedback so far

    I promise to change the flying ship sequence, so that it works for everyone.
    I tried it 3 times and it worked for me - sorry for that

    Quote Originally Posted by PaddyJ View Post
    2. The part where the ship flies at the end. The rockets didn't look that nice on the ship. I'd maybe put masts on the side of the ship(kinda like wings) that sway a little bit(like they're caught in the wind)
    [COLOR="rgb(0, 191, 255)"]will change that[/COLOR]

    3. The door on the ship at the end that "traps" you in the little room while the ship is flying. It doesn't look that nice. I'd maybe make 2 rectangle doors that move horizontally(like doors on a lift)
    [COLOR="rgb(0, 191, 255)"]I agree [/COLOR]

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    I only got through the first half last night, but I have to say it was amazing! I really like how you can get soo much out of the three layers. The movement of that ship at the very beginning is also astounding! One of the best creators out there! I'll be playing the rest of it soon!



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    Quote Originally Posted by TOBSn08 View Post
    I tried it 3 times and it worked for me - sorry for that
    remember tho...this is YOUR level...so either you're doing something we haven't thought of...or something else is up

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