Dark Matter

[Mighty Heidi]

Dark Matter by MightyHeidi
Dark Matter was the main material used in the level. Everyone starts somewhere right?

My first published Level!! yay!! I'm so happy. I'm proud of my work..though I know it needs improvement. Please tell me what you think

[roux-]

I'll check it out.

[roux-]

I'm sorry, but this level is awful. Good for you for trying something and publishing it! I mean that seriously; I was terrified to publish my first.

I suggest you look at levels by comphermc, morgana25, ladylyn1, rtm223, Wexfordian. In very different ways, each of them shows the extent you can go to with the tools MM has provided us. A no-wrong-turns pseudo-maze with a jetpack, no decoration, made only of dark matter with the background showing through just doesn't cut it, sorry. \

Think about what you like in a level. Think about what is fun for you to play. Then go and build that. If you need help, my pathetic talents are available, but more importantly there is an enormous wealth of knowledge and ability right here in these forums, and my experience has been that everyone here will fall all over themselves to help you. Helping less-able level builders helps everyone, because the overall quality of levels is higher.

Please review Arbitrary Platformer 2.

[Mighty Heidi]

Hey thanks so much!

I'll check it out!

[Mighty Heidi]

This makes me wanna work harder on mine..

[Bloo_boy]

WTH? thats no way to talk about a level, and i liked it, it just needs maybe some Visuals or something but i liked the level lol, dont let people get you down heidi, just keep making stuff and thats it, if you ever need help let me now.

[coasterfreak1235]

Yes, everyone starts somewhere, but do you need to publish them? At least you tried. A thing that may help seeminlgy raise the quality is to turn it silhouette (full darkness, change fog color), but you need to change some bits. And keep creating, mine first wasnt much better than this!

Please try my Cooperation Caves (x2)!

[roux-]

WTH? thats no way to talk about a level, and i liked it, it just needs maybe some Visuals or something but i liked the level lol, dont let people get you down heidi, just keep making stuff and thats it, if you ever need help let me now.

Bloo boy, people don't learn if you aren't honest. You're probably too young to remember a time when parents and schools would be honest but supportive with children, as opposed to how it works now, where everyone is allegedly good at everything. The world just ain't that way, this level is not good, I provided several suggestions for Heidi to take--which she thanked me for.