Sleep Teleportation is no Laughing Matter

[Nuffles]

Sleep Teleportation is no Laughing Matter by Nuffles
Sackboy has a serious medical condition that causes him to teleport during sleep.

Hey, I'm new to the forums and I just finished a new level. It is a platformer/puzzle level that is pretty easy. (it is unlocked now) I hope you like the level!

[Valgee]

Where is your key room...?

I HAVE FOUND IT. Ok, but now the key doesn't seem to open any levels...

[Nuffles]

I'll fix the key. Sorry about that

[Fish94]

Aha, the keyroom is awesome xD
It's a good level. It was pretty well designed, and the concept was very interesting. The puzzles involving the keys were good, however I do have one small complaint;
The underwater section was impossible to see. It took me a good 5 minutes to figure out that there were stones to pick up, then another couple of minutes to find the second button.
Apart from that, it was great

Could I have feedback on my level?
http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...K-Introduction

[MegaBlob]

Well done!
first my main problem - at the end of the level where you jump into the nook that seems to take you to the scoreboard broke on me, i hopped in, waited a few seconds, started jumping around and grabbing in the dark and then i see the scoreboard right below me, but couldn't get to it. i popped myself, and ended up at the last checkpoint in pitch black.
other than that great level - fish94 mentioned the buttons are hard to see, they are hard to spot.
pretty simple gameplay and puzzles (i like the ball on and moving platforms) and the visuals were non-complex but excellent.
some dialogue about whats goin on may be nice.

try F4F spelunking level, link in sig

[Nuffles]

You're supposed to jump down from where you said you got stuck. I made the underwater part brighter

[MegaBlob]

to upload screenshots, go to your profile, then albums then upload a new photo album. copy the link to the uploaded image you want between [IMG] and [/IMG] or just insert image selecting "go advanced" when editing the post you want to put the images in

[Nuffles]

Alright, pics are up, thanks

[WilsonLBP]

Interesting level, interesting design.
I love the puzzles, and I was also very suprised to see a cool level on the "Cool Levels" page for once.
Gameplay is pretty good, a little bland, but I liked it.
And is this your first level, 'cos if it is, you're on a GREAT start to level-making!
Look forward to seeing more from you!

[Crazu]

I just played few minutes ago your level
I like the aspect of the level as what it is, great work, music works with it too nicely.
Puzzles were fun, but then I got stuck in first water part for a while, because it was little bit dark at there where you need to grab a rock in the sealing and other big rock moves away, and you need to swim fast through. But it was fun jumping platform level and I made a new score 7050 gave it also 5 stars. Make more of these!
Also when you have the time check out my level Lighthouse for F4F.

[AbstractSam]

Nice level. I kind of was dissapointed at how the visuals changed from the black silhouettes to the ugly blue, but I got used to it, even started likeing the visuals. It had a Dr. Seuss feel to it which was nice. I liked the neat puzzles, they were fun. You could of fixed some areas to make it look more natural, for instance, when the thruster smoke comes up it doesn't even look like the smoke kills you, because you can see the gas quite well. Unfortunetly, I wasn't able to finish the level because at the part where that spiked half-oval enemy is, there is a thing you have to grab that makes you go up. I grabbed it, it took me up, but then I let go, landed back on the first floor, and the thing wouldn't come down. No way I could of completed it. Still, nice level. ^^

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Can you leave feedback on Farewell Ruins of the Moon: Chapter One by AbstractSam? Thanks.

[Weretigr]

The sub-title thingy made me laugh, and the screenshots look epic! I'm definitely playing this when I'm next on LBP!

[nitewalker11]

Have you ever read the Dean Koontz book, "The Bad Place"? The plot is basically about solving the problem of Frank Pollard, who can't sleep becasue he teleports every time he does.
Yeah.
Haven't played the level, but now I certainly will.

[Nuffles]

If you fall of the grabbable thing that takes you up you just have to grab the switch that brings it down again.

[AbstractSam]

If you fall of the grabbable thing that takes you up you just have to grab the switch that brings it down again.

Ah, I see. I'll try that then.

[monstahr]

Hi, I really enjoyed it! I liked what you did with basically 1 color. Gameplay was interesting and the level was atmospheric. It was a little dark for my TV, and that got frustrating on a couple occasions. Add in a couple more lights here and there? Maybe it's because I didn't play in HD but whatever, my gamma was all the way up and it was still kinda dark. I enjoyed it though! 5 stars.

If you could play my level 'Deck' that would be sweet. I think it drifted off to the second page of the showcase but I'd like more than 7 plays haha

[JustinArt]

Cool level. The blue lighting feeling gives this level an artistic vision and the gameplay is excellent. By the way, near the last closed gate, I accidentally grabbed a sponge and I dropped down to the outside of the level. You need to extend that sponge with the corner edit tool. Overall I gave it 5 stars.

Play and F4F "The Hero Chronicles LV3 Action Mansion" if you can.

[Strangepom]

Good points:
+ Good job nice sized level
+ I like a level that is not horizontal and yours was certainly varied and interesting.
+ Effect lighting was done nicely
+ Well thought out puzzles

Room for improvement:
- Fell out of your level by the big tree section
- Global lightimg made some puzzles a trickt to see (eg where is the next grab switch?)
- a bit sticky coming down at the end (got lost in blackness even before JUMP DOWN sign)

I give it 4 stars

you might like my emitter device
F4F puzzle emitter project

[Richasackboy]

It was a neat level. kinda dark, but it was cool! I got stuck a few times in it, for example in the underwater parts with the buttons, some grabby things, and the bit near the end, which took about10 minutes to figure out. :/
I gave the level 4 stars and a tag of beautiful.
Could you please F4F my level River Rush? The link is in my signature.

[wolverine_2008]

I loved this level, very interesting platforming sequences, loved the title great visuals

SUGGESTIONS
-maybe use some LED lights to make parts brighter, because in most parts I got really confused on what to do at parts because i didn't know what to do but i somehow figured it out

overall annnnd