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    Color Gardens 2 by Shhabbazz
    Take a journey to get to the Legendary Control....

    IDK why the pic wont show ^^^

    I spent around 20 hours making this level.


    Thanks to Damaz10, Schrader4,Richasasackboy, and anyone else that helped or tested. Hope you guys like it!!


    I'm starting work on the last level in the series..... NOW
    Last edited by Shhabbazz; 06-07-2010 at 06:13 AM.

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    Sweet, I can finally play it one last time... and it's complete! lol
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    Quote Originally Posted by Richasackboy View Post
    Playing this evening... Did you enter the Kids Game Changers?
    I thought that was over.... i entered a different contest though.

    I feel soooo stupid!! It was like 10:00 last night after a big day and i forgot to do a couple things in it and now im rushing to fix them lol.

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    So, I played it! Last night. Nice level.

    The decorations really added to it, because I was there when the atmosphere hadn't been fully developed yet. Nice tree.
    The Guy who cares for the gardens - are you going to do some sort of character design revamp? I would like to see more than his head for once...
    It was cool, but near the end, I started to get confused, leapt down a layer, and then got stuck back where the going diagonally up platforms began. I felt the ending was rushed, and some parts of the level were a bit tense... I couldn't see the scoreboard at the end, and the teleportation method seemed kinda lame... Make sure you have enough room to finish the level properly, and with a story, next time. I don't care, use the thermo cheat, but make the story work at the end! It kinda killed the feel of the level for me. I was getting a bit confused before that as well, some arrows would be nice...

    So, it was nice, cool story, not so much at the end, and perhaps you could add some more background stuff near the end of the level?
    So I gave it and a heart!
    Could you leave feedback on my level, River Rush? Link's in the signature.

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    Hi, so I played your level today
    and it was pretty good, color theme and lights worked, little dark here and there, but didn't bother me.
    But when I got to the end it was little roughly made some bit, don't keep a hurry with your work, just go with the flow, and if your inspiration stops, continue later.
    There were few problems jumping in layers and with camera angles, I confused a little where I should go, because I couldn't see where to jump or how the layers went on some places. gave it
    Check out my level Lighthouse for F4F when you have the time, thanks.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Richasackboy View Post
    I felt the ending was rushed, and some parts of the level were a bit tense... I couldn't see the scoreboard at the end, and the teleportation method seemed kinda lame... Make sure you have enough room to finish the level properly, and with a story, next time. I don't care, use the thermo cheat, but make the story work at the end! It kinda killed the feel of the level for me. I was getting a bit confused before that as well, some arrows would be nice...

    and perhaps you could add some more background stuff near the end of the level?
    Thanks!
    I will continue to add background stuff towards the end.
    and also, the thermo is way to high for not using teleporting...

    I will play your level soon!

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    This level was pretty cool and simple, this i mean in terms of visual and game-play, the level itself is fun and the idea its nice. You also made a pretty cool use of the corner edit tool.

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    Good job!

    Please play my level wooden platforms and leave some feedback. Thanks!

    http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...703#post489703

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    ok I will play your level! and yes, there is not much gameplay...

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    Ok! I made some updates based on your guys comments!

    oops! My bad didnt notice that i posted right before this!! Sorry
    Last edited by Shhabbazz; 06-13-2010 at 03:05 AM. Reason: didnt notice the double post...

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    I finish playing your level and it is pretty good actually the thing it impress me because this level looks like the world of colors and that level was an original. I love the background of the level it was impressive but there are some thing you need to fix and that is the lighting. Sometimes I cant see the platform so if was kind of difficult but overall a really nice level.

    I wound give it a there are some things that you are missing but it was an enjoyable level


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    I thought of something to do with the 2p area instead of just dieing.

    Put a teleportation thingy at the end of the 2p area!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arnaldo17 View Post
    I finish playing your level and it is pretty good actually the thing it impress me because this level looks like the world of colors and that level was an original.
    I just played that level!! And yes, I agree that the visuals are pretty similar...

    Quote Originally Posted by Arnaldo17 View Post
    I love the background of the level it was impressive but there are some thing you need to fix and that is the lighting. Sometimes I cant see the platform so if was kind of difficult but overall a really nice level.
    Thanks! I tried to mess with the lighting... and in some places it worked well and others not so well... but I am workin on it!!

    Thanks man! I will try out your levels and give feedback!!

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