Sackboy And The Demantoid Crystal (part1/2)

[Otune]

Just played this. The level looks fantastic. The lighting, rocks and fire go well together at the beginning. The building coming out of the ground was cool, but it was hard to get up. If you try and climb on the left side, it's almost impossible. I wasn't able to do it. The right is easier, but still quite difficult. The level was also quite short, but the second part should make up for that.

I rated . I'm looking forward to seeing part 2

F4F: http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...-LBW7&p=548415

[Arnald23]

Thanks 4 the Feedback Otune and Cog!

[warlord_evil]

I finally played this level.

It was great, but there should be more gameplay, more use of materials. (Different materials throughout.) And the first cutscene part should be quicker.

5 stars.

[Arnald23]

I finally played this level.

It was great, but there should be more gameplay, more use of materials. (Different materials throughout.) And the first cutscene part should be quicker.

5 stars.

Thanks 4 the feedback man

[RedShadow_88]

Played it an hour ago, so here is my little feedback!

It reminds me of my "LittleBig Ski Weekend"-Trilogie. Mountains, falling rocks and everything. I liked that! (:
Maybe a bit more materials would've been better, overall there were nice visuals and a nice gameplay. The part in the water was very good, I liked the red colours! ;D
The cutscene was a bit too long, maybe it would be better if it is quicker.
So, more I don't have to say, I hope its enough.. [:

I gave it and a

[Arnald23]

Thanks 4 the feedback everyone I just hope my level get in next community spotlight

[Marshmallow06]

That looks awesooooooooooooooooooome :0

[Arnald23]

That looks awesooooooooooooooooooome :0

thanks man lol

Also guys I need your help if you guys can help me get more plays for my level I will really appreciated it only has 220 play

[Kaumy]

You're very good at creating levels
I think you should put some rockets to give an effect of steam, especially in the beginning of the level.

Very well I tested this morning and
Very good

[Arnald23]

You're very good at creating levels
I think you should put some rockets to give an effect of steam, especially in the beginning of the level.

Very well I tested this morning and
Very good

thanks man for the feedback but still I wish I had more plays and hearts

But I will try my best

[onturenio]

Hi, I played the level. In general is a great level I gave you Little bit more into detail


Good:
- the atmosphere is nice in general
- the use of the layers is pretty good, and helps creating the atmosphere. The moving background is a great idea
- you have gameplay, puzzles, and surprises, that's cool
- the final castle is awesome

Things you could improve
- the underwater puzzle is little bit trivial. Further, I got squeezed a couple of times in the fliping wheel. You may want to modify the geometry to avoid that
- you could add more gameplay in the caves to avoid people getting bored in the very beginning. Some climbing between rocks could be fine, and it's easy to add
- you could use lava material instead of fire. It would improve in my opinion the visual aspect

Overall this is a great level. I will play the sequel for sure . Could you please try my level "The tanks factory 2" and let me know you opinion about the gameplay and the length of the level? Thank you mate.

[Arnald23]

Hi, I played the level. In general is a great level I gave you Little bit more into detail


Good:
- the atmosphere is nice in general
- the use of the layers is pretty good, and helps creating the atmosphere. The moving background is a great idea
- you have gameplay, puzzles, and surprises, that's cool
- the final castle is awesome

Things you could improve
- the underwater puzzle is little bit trivial. Further, I got squeezed a couple of times in the fliping wheel. You may want to modify the geometry to avoid that
- you could add more gameplay in the caves to avoid people getting bored in the very beginning. Some climbing between rocks could be fine, and it's easy to add
- you could use lava material instead of fire. It would improve in my opinion the visual aspect

Overall this is a great level. I will play the sequel for sure . Could you please try my level "The tanks factory 2" and let me know you opinion about the gameplay and the length of the level? Thank you mate.

Thanks 4 the feedback

[SackRacer77]

Wow really good level! Visuals, gameplay, all of it! Really great! And the cliffhanger ending makes me wanna play the next one!

[Arnald23]

Ok this level is pretty old so wend LittleBigPlanet 2 comes out I will create a remix version and finish creating part 2 ok

[psyntens]

Hey my friend!! i was play your level and i love it, is very impressive the cave, and i like it so much the atmosphere is pretty awesome, i like too the character is funny and has good design, the osbtacles are good, and the combination of water is really appropriate, I really like these gears that opened the floodgates, adds challenge to the level that's interesting.

Keep ur work congratulations you hv a VERY GOOD LEVEL

i gave you and