Danger in The Subway (Remake) parts 1 and 2

[xQziCyFlaMeZxQz_]

Danger in The Subway (Remake) parts 1 and 2 *SPOTLIGHTED* by xQziCyFlaMeZxQz
Please try my level Danger in theSubway (Remake) parts 1 and 2. In the level you are lost in an abandoned subway station. Both parts were together before but it was WAY too laggy. I added alot of detail to the level. I worked SOOO fudging hard on making all the custom stickers that i used. And one thing i want everyone to notice is that there are signs around the whole lvl saying "section 2 B" or somethig like that. I worked hard on those and they look pretty KOO. Please leave feedback on both of the parts as one level. Thank you!

EDIT: Yay! SPOTLIGHTED

[xQziCyFlaMeZxQz_]

Oh and here are some pictures:








Sorry some of the pictures might be quite dark
P.S. these are from parts 1 and 2

[koltonaugust]

Looks cool I think I might get on tomorrow, but I'm not sure. I'll see how much i have to do for band.

[Dark-Match]

The levels are very beautifully detailed, however I find at times there is so much going on
that it makes it difficult to tell where you need to go or how to get to where you need to go.
I also ran into several foreground/background layering issues when trying to jump platforms.

I love the environment and feel of the levels keep it up!

[celsus]

Played both levels, left you a comment on the level, but it sensored something, and there is no edit option to find out what, so I reposted it with new woring and spelled text test, so I didn't feel like posting a third time. Loved the flow of the level, really solid subway level (I love trains, the level I made of a steamboat was supposed to be a train, but since it was a mystery I felt it would be too close to the story, "Murder on The Orient Express". Only things I had issues with was the second level jumping on the two rotating platforms with electric around them, LBP physics loved to make me move back and die, the first level, first train exit moving to the left was a bit hard again because of LBP auto selecting me further back when I jumped. Things you could add that were not issues was that the sheech bubbles you used for camera views when tasks completed were all blank, a simple "go here" would make it feel smoother, blank text just reminded me of all the times I typed text and then forgot to hit enter instead of back, or the censor just decided not to even save it (that one really bites because you don't find it out until you test it online). Other than that I saw a censor (prox) in the elevator at the end of the first level that maybe should have been hidden, and there was a point where jumping on a box to grab was foiled by a close by grabbable material, I don't recall where it happened. Again great level, those things are just little details that may give it a smoother feel. Laughed about your having to split the level, I had to split one into six parts and that was after removing tons, I hope the next LBP gives more room to work with.

[Holguin86]

Oh and here are some pictures:

http://i37.tinypic.com/2miw41.jpg

http://i33.tinypic.com/2ivipa0.jpg

http://i36.tinypic.com/n6ue6f.jpg

http://i38.tinypic.com/bezvpz.jpg

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[xQziCyFlaMeZxQz_]

Try wrapping [img][/img] tags around your image links instead of [url][/url] tags. This way, the images appear directly in your post.

oh okay thanks!

[PaddyJ]

The key to part 2 doesn't work(doesn't lead to anything)

I don't have the key glitch btw

[Sim725]

Dont Fear Soverso is here *ahem* Yeah filmed both parts into one video For you Love those levels.

Link:Soon...Uploading

[xQziCyFlaMeZxQz_]

The key to part 2 doesn't work(doesn't lead to anything)

I don't have the key glitch btw

Yeah i fixed it. It should work now...... hopefully

[xQziCyFlaMeZxQz_]

Dont Fear Soverso is here *ahem* Yeah filmed both parts into one video For you Love those levels.

Link:Soon...Uploading

I saw the video! Thanks for uploading it!

[Endless_BLAZE]

The pictures look GREAT! And plus its spotlighted too!? Oh i definitley gotta go try this out! I will give you my feedback later.

[xQziCyFlaMeZxQz_]

Thanks for all the feedback everyone! Appreciate it

[Endless_BLAZE]

Wow! Super great levels here!
It was very fun to play
One of the most detailed levels i have ever seen

The gameplay was pretty good but it wasnt amazingly good. Usually a level that detailed would have amazing gameplay but i guess you just have to work on that. (Kinda reminds me of Final Fantasy 13, AMAZING GRAPHICS but mediocre gameplay )
lol not saying the gameplay was bad at all it was all quite GREAT but not as great as creators like poms and SteveBigGuns but ya know. I have a good feeling you are gunna be one of those AMAZING creators! well you kinda already close but you will make it. Judging by how many hearts you have you must not be nearly as known as poms or SteveBigGuns but you should be . Anyway great level! 5 stars and heart!

[xQziCyFlaMeZxQz_]

Wow! Super great levels here!
It was very fun to play
One of the most detailed levels i have ever seen

The gameplay was pretty good but it wasnt amazingly good. Usually a level that detailed would have amazing gameplay but i guess you just have to work on that. (Kinda reminds me of Final Fantasy 13, AMAZING GRAPHICS but mediocre gameplay )
lol not saying the gameplay was bad at all it was all quite GREAT but not as great as creators like poms and SteveBigGuns but ya know. I have a good feeling you are gunna be one of those AMAZING creators! well you kinda already close but you will make it. Judging by how many hearts you have you must not be nearly as known as poms or SteveBigGuns but you should be . Anyway great level! 5 stars and heart!

Wow thanks! (P.S. Final Fantasy had beast gameplay AND graphics!)