LBL: 4 in 1 - B.O.B

[theonlybub]

LBL: 4 in 1 - B.O.B by theonlybub
A fun quirky level ready to be played by the open minded. Has a short bit of humor and a touch of creativity. XD I hope you like boss batles, because this is one of them!

Please enjoy my level, in total, I probably spent 30=50 hours on it. It took a very long time!

My best level yet!

BTW: I will only be able to post Feedback for others tomorrow and then when I get back home on Monday.

Once again, THank you!

[thor]

I just checked out your level. The intro part was pretty well-done, looked professional. Then it launched into a battle reminiscent of the VR challenge level in the MGS pack, perhaps it was too similar but I'll let that slide because it was fun. The only thing I would say is that it wasn't very obvious (or easy) to jump onto the red platform to avoid the gas. Maybe the gas should spread slowly? Then came the final battle against B.O.B. which I was expecting to be epic... with all these different things happening - fire, red eyes and gas - I was expecting a protracted battle. What I got was three red things that I had to shoot in turn, whilst jumping on platforms that sometimes fell, but B.O.B. didn't attack me at all! I presume this isn't meant to work like this and it broke... but it shouldn't do this. Didn't take me long to win the battle. So basically that ruined it for me, and I can only give you until it is fixed, sorry. But it looks promising! If you can get it working it may be worth 4 or 5 stars who knows.

Check out my levels in my sig if you can.

[theonlybub]

Grrr. I thought I fixed that! NOOOOOO! XD Yeah, i'll check it out. Now I realized why it only has 3 stars....THanks for giving me some feedback

EDIT: I fixed the level. The part that made everything happen was glued to the mechanism....:/
I wish i saw that earlier....

[psyntens]

I have played to your level just now and it has seemed to me to be brilliant, initially he was not dealing where to go until descrubrí the rope and it only is something of what cost work to me, there is very well realized the mini game that you made i get pleased, it is entertained, and though difficult it turns out to be is entertaining enough since you do not know that to put attention LOL since you meet attacked by all sides or with fire, or with the earthquake or when the platforms get where these stopped, i have liked it and because of it.

I have given you 5'S

I wait could play to my level WOOD WORLD http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...593-Wood-world I would like to know your opinion. Thanks

[Sabre_]

I just played your level and heres my feedback:

Positives:
+Boss fight was pretty good
+Dialogue was okay
+Characters were very good

Negatives:
-Building look kind of plain with the brown look but I understand the feel you was trying to give off with the building...

Overall this level was very good:
F4F- Umbra Valley: A lost soul by L1ghtMare
F4F- Umbra Valley 2: Perpetual Escape by Me

[theonlybub]

I have played to your level just now and it has seemed to me to be brilliant, initially he was not dealing where to go until descrubrí the rope and it only is something of what cost work to me, there is very well realized the mini game that you made i get pleased, it is entertained, and though difficult it turns out to be is entertaining enough since you do not know that to put attention LOL since you meet attacked by all sides or with fire, or with the earthquake or when the platforms get where these stopped, i have liked it and because of it.

I have given you 5'S

I wait could play to my level WOOD WORLD http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...593-Wood-world I would like to know your opinion. Thanks

WOW! I was not expecting anyone to give me 5 stars for my work! I really appreciate it. I worked so hard and I am glad someone enjoys it. I just played your level before reading this so I will give you some feedback!

[theonlybub]

I just played your level and heres my feedback:

Positives:
+Boss fight was pretty good
+Dialogue was okay
+Characters were very good

Negatives:
-Building look kind of plain with the brown look but I understand the feel you was trying to give off with the building...

Overall this level was very good:
F4F- Umbra Valley: A lost soul by L1ghtMare
F4F- Umbra Valley 2: Perpetual Escape by Me

Thanks for the feedback!
There is not much I can do to fix it now because I am not allowed to rebublish it after today, but I understand what you are saying.
I will play your levels as soon as I give feedback for others.

[thanatos989]

Okay, boss battles aren't really my thing, but I played your level and scored third.

I could tell you have some complex logic and mechanics in play here. The boss does a lot of nasty stuff, and I had a tough time knocking it off. I did feel that having sections of the floor falling away while respawning into the gaps and dying again was bit unfair to the player. So I would tweak the time they stay down to less. You still sink down, but they come back up quicker. Not sure how you timed that out, but I'm sure there's something to do here.

One of the mouths has the word "new" when you mean "knew."

I'm also having a hard time connecting the beginning of the story with the prison with the B.O.B. machine. I just think I missed something.

Lastly, you should move the off camera logic bits away from your cut scenes. You see them when you transition back and forth in the opening section. You also see some bits further along in the level.

Thanks for playing and commenting on my level. I wish you good luck with yours.

[theonlybub]

Yay! After so long, I finally made the effort to get some photos up of my level. I hope you all like them...I hope...ERK

[mutant_red_peas]

I played this boss, and here's what I thought:

-Good visuals
-Nice concept!
-Good 2 bosses
-The second boss was quite tricky. It must have been fixed because it worked fine and did everything the thing with instructions said.
-Great intro

There's loads more but I'm running out of time, so I'll leave it there. But judging by the feedback I have, I'd give you............................................... ...........

(Dramatic Pause)



4 Stars! Good one but with any spare thermo add a little bit more visuals.