Wow! You really did a great job, I really see the improvements and add ons you added from the few times I entered it with you in create and play mode! I really don't have any suggestions, mainly because I can't do anything half as good, but I was wondering how you did the scoreboard at the end..... great level! 5 stars and to my hearted list this level goes! would you mind having feedback on my level 'The Pride Lands'? Thanks again!

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’Mars sighed. "Two hundred Romans, and no one's got a pen? Never mind!"
He slung his M16 onto his back and pulled out a hand grenade. There were many screaming Romans. Then the grenade morphed into a ballpoint pen, and Mars began to write.
Frank looked at Percy with wide eyes. He mouthed: Can your sword do grenade form?
Percy mouthed back, No. Shut up.‘
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Thanks clone! Love all the positive feedback Im getting off of this level!Wow! You really did a great job, I really see the improvements and add ons you added from the few times I entered it with you in create and play mode! I really don't have any suggestions, mainly because I can't do anything half as good, but I was wondering how you did the scoreboard at the end..... great level! 5 stars and to my hearted list this level goes! would you mind having feedback on my level 'The Pride Lands'? Thanks again!
About your Scoreboard question, Klawwtheclown (prattz) Did the scoreboard glitch for me. I have no idea how he did it TBH. Contact him for the tutorial I guess.
PS: I Updated the level with a secrets label near the secret meter area to prevent any further confusion. Also, I am going online really soon.
Im going to add some more desired sound effects, infinite live checkpoints in some of the harder area of the level, and fix a few bugs that have been reported. Such as that gas glitch by the first secret area!
HUGE thanks to those who have given me feedback so far, I would love to make my level as perfect as possible, so keep the feedback coming!
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UPDATE: Fixed ALL random gas spots and added a bigger reward for finding all secrets and completeing the X2 area.
EDIT: I played all of the F4F levels posted in this thread! Great levels, People!Last edited by grayspence; 09-11-2010 at 04:35 PM.
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09-11-2010 #19Bloop!
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You just have to merge some thin material into the scoreboard screen. There's like, 5 different ways to do it.
I just use the layer popping one, since it was the first one I found after the original way was patched in the water beta.
[SPOILER]1. Take a baseless scoreboard, and bring it to the second layer from the front.
2. Press L1 + X
3. Place some polysterene in front of it, in the front thin layer.
4. Stickurr it.
5. Select the scoreboard, it'll layer pop into the polysterene.
6. Glue.
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I still haven't player this level by myself yet, I will later. I've already played it with you plenty of times, but I wanna get the high score. And heart it.
I already gave you some feedback while you were making it, so yeah.





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Ha! Thanks Klaww!
I love the feedback the level is getting! Ive never had anything more sucessful!
EDIT: Keep the feedback coming! I would love more F4Fs!Last edited by grayspence; 09-11-2010 at 06:12 PM.
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UPDATE: Mega fix: added bubbles for the more curious sacks, Made the boulder sensor switch more sensitive, Added a few minor detals to the spinning wheel section, and I am currently in the midst of trying to fix the left cannon on the bubble collecting section!
Thanks for putting up with all of my updates guys! Ive been trying to follow your advice as closley as I can to make it the most fun for everyone!
Thanks for bearing with me- Grayspence
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09-11-2010 #22HALLOWEEN CARNIVAL IS OUT
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I have played to your level and it has seemed to me to be enterteining, i like the history and the secrets still that i did not obtain all it is a very good idea and the character are graceful, the game-play is good enough, has too much adventure and the part of the cows I like me very much.
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Thanks psytens! Of course Ill check out your level! I will play it ASAP!
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09-11-2010 #24
Nice first level! Atleast i think its your first
. You really captured the feel of the canyons with this one but you put your own twist into it. loved all the various gameplay and obstacles. It really felt like an add-on to the story mode. here are my suggestions:
-The button after the 2 side by side jump pads is hard to see . I had restarted because I thought i had to use the jump pads to get over to the right then on my second playthrough I saw the button barely.
- The snapshot cam is akward. The camera jerks while your in mid air. maybe make it earlier or have it go off in .1 seconds while in mid air.
Overall very good level. Gave it 5 stars and a heart and also have 3rd place
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Thanks l1ghtmare! I will fix the snapshot camera issue soon. I have had a few levels published, but this is my first try at making a level to my full abilties.Nice first level! Atleast i think its your first
. You really captured the feel of the canyons with this one but you put your own twist into it. loved all the various gameplay and obstacles. It really felt like an add-on to the story mode. here are my suggestions:
-The button after the 2 side by side jump pads is hard to see . I had restarted because I thought i had to use the jump pads to get over to the right then on my second playthrough I saw the button barely.
- The snapshot cam is akward. The camera jerks while your in mid air. maybe make it earlier or have it go off in .1 seconds while in mid air.
Overall very good level. Gave it 5 stars and a heart and also have 3rd place
. Only found 2 secrets though 
I could probobly find out a way to attract more attention to the button by putting some kind of light near it. Other than that, I tried a camera angle set to go off when the player collected all the bubbles, but that didnt work. Im sorry you had to restart because of that!
Im actually glad you didnt find all of the secrets! It proves that they arent too easy, yet they arent too hard, as you found at least two!
Thanks for the nice rating and the heart! I really appreciate it!
I enjoyed your level a lot too!
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Hey there, thanks for your kind words on my Flying Saucers From Mars level.
Crazy Canyon is a delight to play. First of all, I love a good continuation of an original Story level. I also appreciate the way you kept it in the MM style. I have my own style, but I will always love the original MM Story style the best. Great details. I loved the wobbly shutter, and your enemies were great.
I started with the race mode, but died like a noob on a regular checkpoint and had to restart. I then went on without the race mode because I reasoned that I needed to slow down and look around to comment on your level.
The level did break on me and I had to restart again. It happened with the bounce barrels that enable you to get the point bubbles and activate the flipping red button to escape that part. I managed to break both of these with one bubble left and I couldn't go on. But I restarted and got the red button to flip. I think what happened was I managed to drop down inside the barrel and have the piston shoot past my sackboy. After that jumping in and out wouldn't work. And then I did the same thing to the other one. Weird. Anyway, I was more careful the second time and had no trouble.
That was my only issue. Great design. I had a blast and didn't mind restarting. Good luck.Live "life near the bone, where it's sweetest." H.D. Thoreau
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Great level very clean and stable. Although couldn't get passed launching barrels they stopped working for me. The ones that shoot you up to the hanging points bubbles. Anyways I rated 5 and hearted.
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May I suggest that you use an AND switch with 2 mag keys and switches for the bounce pads, so that if both break, than the button flips up anyway?
’Mars sighed. "Two hundred Romans, and no one's got a pen? Never mind!"
He slung his M16 onto his back and pulled out a hand grenade. There were many screaming Romans. Then the grenade morphed into a ballpoint pen, and Mars began to write.
Frank looked at Percy with wide eyes. He mouthed: Can your sword do grenade form?
Percy mouthed back, No. Shut up.‘
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Thanks! i think i might do that!
Thanks for the feedback! I am trying desperately to fix these! I think Super_clone's solution will fix it once and for all!
Thanks for that, Thanatos989! I love a nice full featured feedback post! as you can see, I cant currently come up with anything that can fix the barrels. However, Super_clone's idea may just work!Hey there, thanks for your kind words on my Flying Saucers From Mars level.
Crazy Canyon is a delight to play. First of all, I love a good continuation of an original Story level. I also appreciate the way you kept it in the MM style. I have my own style, but I will always love the original MM Story style the best. Great details. I loved the wobbly shutter, and your enemies were great.
I started with the race mode, but died like a noob on a regular checkpoint and had to restart. I then went on without the race mode because I reasoned that I needed to slow down and look around to comment on your level.
The level did break on me and I had to restart again. It happened with the bounce barrels that enable you to get the point bubbles and activate the flipping red button to escape that part. I managed to break both of these with one bubble left and I couldn't go on. But I restarted and got the red button to flip. I think what happened was I managed to drop down inside the barrel and have the piston shoot past my sackboy. After that jumping in and out wouldn't work. And then I did the same thing to the other one. Weird. Anyway, I was more careful the second time and had no trouble.
That was my only issue. Great design. I had a blast and didn't mind restarting. Good luck.Spotlighter for LBPC,
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Alright guys! Updating the Cannons as soon as I get online today! I really hope I can fix this issue! Its making everyone restart!
I promise itll get done today! I will update this ost when i do fix it!
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