A Broken Paradise (Spotlighted)

[jowife1993]

Awesome level! To the cool pages for you lol.

[damaz10]

Okay so I'm going to write as I play as soon as you enter the theme is set and it is incredibly cool. The subltle led lighting is superb and I like the use of stikering right off the bat. The falling platforms are good, maybe add sound effects as they land? Nice mushrooms cut-outs! I find the grabble sponge that lifts you up a bit stiff, maybe change it to string so there is a bit of challenge for the players? Nice R1 stiker help throughout. I see some great point combos, nice man. The switch you pull is sorta hidden at first, more noticable stickering there? Aww it's over already? Great level dude, 5 ***** and a from me Great pace and great visuals, loved it to death!

[nillrecuring]

Thanks damaz10 for checking out my level, and this is the 23rd post so ive already hit the cool pages and got a spotlight for this level, so slowly but surely this level is getting some plays, thanks all those who played my level

[Dante95]

Surely a level with great visuals: you did a vert good use of fire, sticker and materials, creating a touching atmosphere.
The music you picked helped making that atmosphere, so good choice. Obviously the level was too short, I think it can be caused by the thermo, our biggest enemy.
The gameplay was ok, good platforms and other things.
I had a little lag playing this level, maybe caused by the complexity of the visuals.
Overall, a very good level, sadly too short.

I'd like if you tried my level for F4F: "The Long Night of Mr. Krom" or "Mm Squad's Christmas mission: Protect the Pack!" by xDante95x. You can find the thread clicking on "My Creations" under my nickname. Just choose one of them and play it, then give me a little feedback

[nillrecuring]

Neally finished my last LBP1 level and I'm looking for beta testers anyone who could help please message me. Thanks

[Gravel•]

Hey Dude,

You're holding out on me... your a darn good creator. Congratulations on the spotlight... looks like you broke that century mark! The look of this level is brilliant and that's coming after I played Arabian Ruins, which is a feast for the eyes! I had a couple minor layer switching issues but nothing which detracted from my overall experience...

To your credit, at one point I thought I was in a Morgana25 level. It was the section of platforming where you are hauled up and the sections part to allow you past... I think she had the exact same thing in one of her dragons of myth levels but in reverse! There's no accusation there... just compliment. With a little more planning and some patients, I think you could pump out some truly worthy full levels... Anyway, nice work.

[nillrecuring]

thanks, i dont really get many of those kind of reviews on my levels. With the section were you go up and objects move out of yor path i didn't know it was out of one of her levels, mainly because i havent played only seen them after i played her fire and ice level. Anyway thanks and ill try and get my review on the level i said id review, lol
Thanks

Offer still open for beta testers

[midnight_heist]

Decided to play your levels since you give good feedback to others.

Nice level. Good looks, decent gameplay in there too.
Shame about the length.

The biggest improvement I could suggest, is to use the "squint test".
Basicially squint your eyes at each section of your level. The path should be still be clear.
It's a trick from Naughty Dog I heard they used on their Crash levels. For example on the underwater levels in Crash 3, there is a bright blue line (in the back layer) guiding the player all the way through.
The reason I bring it up is that the path is completing with the background in your level.

Would be happy to beta test anything of yours.

[Lockstitch]

Hey just wanted atop by and say I played your level. It was short but fun none the less. Always better to have quality over quantity. I'll check out some more of your stuff when I get some time.

[psyntens]

I was play your level and i love it so much, the design is pretty, cool and lovely the use of the layers i like it so much i think more important than ever levels especially in the game-play, the osbtáculos, roads, and all areas are well designed, represented and very clean, and this makes the level even more interesting, i liked the use of fire areas is very well thought out, like the use of stickers is pretty good, have a good job here and a deserved spotlight

I gave you
And i hope you play it my new level and tell me your opinion. Thanks http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...3323-Steam-inc