Coffee Cake by eagerneph *SPOTLIGHTED*

[eagerneph]

Coffee Cake by eagerneph
Short, sweet fun. Like that first bite of Coffee Cake.

Accept this as my Christmas gift to all you happy gadders out there! Have fun with it! Feedback will be greatly
appreciated.

Special Thanks To:
VelcroJonze for being a great beta tester.
Spark151 for being a great beta tester.
Valmassoi for being a great beta tester.
And everyone else out there who has inspired me to create!

Thanks Valmassoi for the great pictures!

[VelcroJonze]

Awesome dude!!

I will grab this now and leave you feedback as soon as possible.

[lego12]

* Runs to PSP as fast as i can*

[jimydog000]

Aghhhh! hurry up downloading!....
Legendary game play! 5 stars and a heart!
I have nothing else to say.

[Spark151]

A piece of Cake, a piece of Coffee, and a piece of Feedback for you Eagerneph. I just want to add, I haven't gave feedback in awhile. I even missed feedback on my favorite creators. As you can see, I finally reached a certain point in LBPC where I'm just quite... how do you say... I'm lazy. Lol :P Anyway, I think not a lot of people know, but if you comment on my profile for feedback, I'll never reject. That's why I'm here to give you feedback. Besides, you are awesome, you deserve. Anyway, just like every feedback of mine. Were done with my introduction, and so let's get down to business.

Before I start complimenting everything I liked about your level, I just want you to know why you are very UNIQUE and AWESOME. Okay, I've finally found out about what makes you different from any creator and I know why I like you bud. After playing "The Color of Music", I couldn't quite understand why you stand out from the community. After playing "Coffee Cake", I knew why... You may have a Platformer Style going on just like VelcroJonze, and BlueBulletBill. Though, what makes you very different is the fact... *Drumroll* Your Obstacles!! I've noticed your obstacles are very different, and it "Wows" the mind. VJ and B3, it's just jumping, dying, and other crazy obstacles. You, on the other hand, your obstacles are dynamic. The platforms move, you create pathways with emitters. Your Platforms give an awesome Dynamic feel. You, my friend, are a great creator.

So, the introduction. I like the LBPCentral Logo. To make it better, the colors fit with the level. There goes the dynamic feel with the emitters creating a wave spread. At first, I didn't like the song, but the more I think about it, the song fits the theme really good. Great choice of music. I like the Easter Egg with the Wooden Block Man. Very cool, put a smile on me. I like the platfrom that goes from side to right side up. The arrows give an awesome dynimic feel. I like the spiky terrain, it adds caution to the level. The bubbles add excitement to the level.

I enjoy the swinging sponge obstacle, plain, but still cool. I like how one of the switches form a path with the emitters. Your sounds add a nagnificent effect to it. I enjoyed the obstacle that brang you from one side to the other with a wobble bolt. I see you know your mechanics. The ending was pretty plain, but overall the level was Outstanding! The materials shine a fun style. Gameplay is very enjoyable. The level lasted neutral, I wish there was more because you are an amazing creator. I've had no errors, glitches, or bugs during my gameplay. It was fun all the way. Now I'm done talking, so let's see what your ratings are...

Length: 5/5 (Good playthrough, and decent length for a platformer level.)
Material Usage: 5/5 (The Materials describe the level. Coffee Cake, sweet, and fun. XD)
Sticker Work: N/A (Hahah... Yeah, let's skip this one)
Corner Editing: 5/5 (Your corner editing is smooth. Everything is marvelous.)
Terrain/Mechanics: 5/5 (This is why I like your level, your obstacles.)
Story: N/A (Is this a joke? XP)

Total: 20/20 Perfect Score!!

Your a very great creator thr first time I met you. You deserve a lot of attention. With that said, I gave you.....

5 Stars and a heart

Your are talented with coffe cake,
-Spark

[eagerneph]

Wow! Thanks sooo much for this massive amount of feedback Spark! Haha yeah, I would've made the level longer, but I was afraid that something was going to break, and the thermo was restricting me by a lot. Velcro knows the story. Thanks again for all the feedback! I really, really appreciate that. Merry Christmas!

[VelcroJonze]

Okay, first of all, thanks for giving me a sneak peek at this.

Second of all, Wow!

I know I have already given you feedback via pm's but I insist on more. From the moment I spawned into the level I knew this was different. Let's face it. You are known for Color of Music. I love that level. If someone picked up lbp on psp for the first time, and I picked the first community level for them to play, it would be COM. That level screams lbp!

But, this is no Color of Music. Where as COM is bright, vibrant, and stickered up in colorful and fun way, Coffee Cake has a refined, streamlined, and almost sterile look to it, but very cool visually. The title is perfect. I know a great title when I hear one. Just look it this level. How can it not be called Coffee Cake?

You are incredible with gameplay. Maybe one of the best. You just know how to make a fun, great playing level. Gameplay is not easy. Good gameplay requires hours of playtesting. I am 100% sure you playtest the *** out of your levels. Every obstacle you created was unique, and the platforming is some of the best I have played in many moons.

No story, but does a level like this need a story? This is classic platforming at it's best, and that is more than enough for me.

I think the length is perfect. I was criticized in the past for making short levels, but you need to leave them wanting more sometimes, right?

Anyway, thanks for putting this up, it is an early Christmas present. I just hope we don't have to wait another half year for your next level.

Hearted of course.

[eagerneph]

Woah! Thanks so much for all this feedback guys! It really means a lot getting feedback from the people who really inspired me to create. That's why I joined this site! There's all you great people out there to inspire me.

As for the next level. We'll have to see. If I'm in a group project, then I'll be forced to make another level.

[Spark151]

Woah! Thanks so much for all this feedback guys! It really means a lot getting feedback from the people who really inspired me to create. That's why I joined this site! There's all you great people out there to inspire me.

I read this, and it reminds me the time I was happy for the feedback Amazingflyingpoo and Taffey gave me.

Anyway, you're an amazing creator. Don't worry about the length, it was decent. It wasn't short. It was satisfying. Anyway, It's not Christmas here yet, but Merry Christmas.

[Ricky-III]

Oh, I had a christmas gathering or whatever you call it and didn't notice your level came out, I'll be sure to play it as soon as I can! Merry Christmas!

[DizzyZebra]

Oh great, yet another level I can't pla- Just kidding, I'll go get the PSP now!

[eagerneph]

You are incredible with gameplay. Maybe one of the best. You just know how to make a fun, great playing level! Gameplay is not easy. Good gameplay requires hours of playtesting. I am 100% sure you playtest the *** out of your levels.

Thanks! And yes, I actually playtest every time I even save in create mode, just because I want to make sure everything is in proper working order. And if not, then I'll go to the copied version of the level on My Moon, and work on that one.

[Random]

Hey I'll play and give feedback when I get Wifi.

Been looking forward to this level, I can't wait!

[anoken]

Here's the pictures I promised:

Your level truly is a treat. It's funny, because when I downloaded this level this morning, we had coffee cake

Great gameplay, similar to VelcroJonze style but with eagerneph flavor. Delicious!! and a

Merry Christmas!

[Ricky-III]

Sorry ,i have no time for feedback. This was one of the best non-christmas themed level in the last few months, great job! 5 stars plus heart!