Awake [Abandoned]

[Dymus]

Well... heres a level I started making quite a while back, but ultimately just gave up on finishing... (You can probably see through the level how it slowly becomes less detailed)

But still!

The 'Plot' involves waking up in a mysterious hospital, unknown to where you are? Emerging outside, you find...

http://lbp.me/v/rv-qvn

[harbingernaut]

i played this level yesterday so i'll give feedback from memory.
i enjoyed playing this level. i felt like i was uncovering a story without any dialogue happening, and i loved it, but then it got boring and dull at the end (i could tell when you started doing less detail )
i was hoping for a sequel, or something to explain what happened. i think this level has a lot of potential in the story. i'd clean up the end a bit and then try to make a series out of this. even with the not so great ending i'm still interested in seeing where this goes

i liked the secret area in the vents. very hard to find but very cool. i didn't like the slamming elevator door. for some reason it gave me a feeling of imminent danger like something was going to get me, but i thought the level should have felt more like you're alone and lost, not like you're scared for your life. but that's just what i got from it

for F4F could you play ginormo burger? thank you