The Tale of Veronia

[Pojo_King1987]

Hey guys, this is my first level/ cutscene I have ever published between LBP 1 & 2. It took me a lot of time to get all of the sackbots motions timed correctly. I actually used other sackbots to pull their logic switces. Please let me know what you think.








Pojo_King

http://lbp.me/v/x743wb

[cackfog]

dontt normaly watch movies on lbp but it was pretty good actualy! not sure what you mean about sackbots working other sackbots though lol

if you get a chance check out my hard times in space series, cheers dude

[Pojo_King1987]

Thank for the reply Cackfog. I played your level and commented. I will do the same for anyone else who plays my level and comments

[arsenalfan_1995]

Queued, I will leave some feedback, will you do the same for me? Link is In the sig

[Keith]

I watched it and left some feedback. Good work.

[XFennoX]

Awesome work on this one! Liked your voice acting, very good and for your first time synching sackbots, that was pretty darn well! The movie had a nice message to it and I hope a lotta other people get to see it, yay it etc. Top show!

[Pojo_King1987]

Synching the bots was an absolute nightmare at times. Everything had to be synched up to the music as well which made it more difficult. I was close to pulling out my hair trying to synch the fight scene. But eventually I figured it out by acting out the using of a grab switch and matching up from there.It definitely gave me a firm understanding of sackbots and their capabilities though, so it should be much easier to use them in my future projects.

[DesignerLuke]

I'm going to check this one out!

Please also check out my level (Link is in signature)

Cheers!

[The inFamous Sack]

Hey Pojo_King,

I had a chance to check out your film the other day. I really enjoyed it. Nice use of voice over work in the film! The materials and layout you used for your level really sold it to me. The environment seemed very authentic AND the clothing of the actors was spot on as well. A fun and enjoyable film to watch. I'm definitely interested to see your creations in the future.

On a side note, do you have the History Pack by MM? There's an audio clip of swords and what not. Might help!

Shifty

[kirbyman62]

I haven't played a community movie before, so this is new for me. OK, I write this as I play (or in this case, watch), so bear with me:

Book looks nice, though the markings seem to just be scattered randomly. Music is nice. The sound could be a bit better, but it's good enough. In the slap bit, I would set the sackbot's behavior to 'Sackboy', it seems werid seeing his head spinning. Plus, why are they slapping? I liked the fight scene, very cool. Ah, nice ending

Overall, a very nice movie. The only other improvment I can think of is, really, the king should wear a crown

[Pojo_King1987]

lol, I'm not sure I had a crown unlocked in my costumes. But yeah, totally agree there. Oh boy, I would change the sackbots behavior to sackboy but that would change his entire movement rhythm, and I really don't want to mess with re-recording all that. I will keep it in mind for the future though. Not sure how i would get a clearer audio sound. I had my eye right next to me when I recorded, maybe that is why? But I had the impression that all recorded sounds sounded a little muffled. None the less thanks for all the comments guys. I think I am going to start on an actual level pretty soon.

[jaboyle]

Thanks for asking me to try out your level man, great job !!! Short and sweet !!! The animation you did with the face and hands was really good aswell !!! good job

[RedShadow_88]

Hey, just watched it!

I don't have much to say.
It was nice and cute. I liked that you used your voice to tell the story!
You could improve the scenery a bit. It didn't look like a big kingdom. It looked more like... well. It could be a lot better!
Also the castle inside could need a bit better design.
The sackbot timing was good but some movements where a bit weird and reminded me: "Well... they are sackboys!" ...if you know what I mean!^^
Well and I'd change the background though. Maybe you'll find a better one. I didn't like the garden fence in the background because it doesn't fit so well with the theme!

But I saw that you've put in a lot of effort, so there's a 'Yay' for you!

[Dangerlove]

I'll give it a watch soon (psnRabbodirect). Seems pretty well rated so far anyway! Could you F4F with mine too? http://lbp.me/v/xeqtb9 (I have some small steering issues to sort out but any feedback is welcome)

[Dangerlove]

Watched it there and it's really good!! Gave it a Yay! I can't imagine ever going through all that sack-bot syncing!? At the catapult part I could barely hear your voice though?? I was really faint for some reason.If I'm going to point out anything it would be that there could be more detail in the sets. Hang some pictures on the wall in the castle and put some decorations in to make it look better. Good show anyway!