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    Love by Wertpol
    A short, experimental level. Its a story of two people who are in love with each other, and the environment acts as a metaphor to the things happening in the story. Entry for LBN´s Love Sack competition.



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    awesome will download it or isnt it finished ?

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    Top hats are underrated. Wertpol's Avatar
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    Its finished.

    EDIT: Hmmmmm I think I shouldnt have called it love.
    I wouldnt click on that either :P
    Last edited by Wertpol; 02-23-2011 at 04:52 PM.
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    Ill take a look matey
    PS3 LBP2 Level
    Alpine Abandon SPOTLIGHT NOD!!!

    PSP Levels
    Treehouse Adventure. SPOTLIGHTED!!!
    Love's Me...Love's Me Not! SPOTLIGHT NOD!!! (Featured)
    Reds Dead, Detention! SPOTLIGHT NOD!!!
    Going For A Wander! (new and improved version) SPOTLIGHT NOD!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by treckooxx1 View Post
    or isnt it finished ?
    by posting this thread in level and object showcase it should be published.

    really nice level with a great colour scheme really liked what the emitters did and all.
    let's hope Quest doesn't say it's too short because yeah the length was perfect
    THIS SENTENCE IS FALSE

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    Lovely, if not a little sad, story matey. Loved the setting of it, the swinging platforms and cranes were a nice addition. One of my favourite parts was when you enter the flat (dont want to give anything away), loved that bit. All in all mate, a great looking, short but sweet level. Nice.

    If ya wanna give us some feedback on my improved Going For A Wonder level mate, that would be great.
    Last edited by JetArtois; 02-26-2011 at 10:44 AM.
    PS3 LBP2 Level
    Alpine Abandon SPOTLIGHT NOD!!!

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    Treehouse Adventure. SPOTLIGHTED!!!
    Love's Me...Love's Me Not! SPOTLIGHT NOD!!! (Featured)
    Reds Dead, Detention! SPOTLIGHT NOD!!!
    Going For A Wander! (new and improved version) SPOTLIGHT NOD!!!

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    thats why i love ur levels theyre simply awesome


    Levels PSP:
    Steam *Spotlighted**Highest Rated Page 6*|The Tree Of Life *Spotlight Nod*|Russian Rocks *Spotlighted*|The Gravity Caves *Spotlighted*


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    It was good. WoodburyRaider's Avatar
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    Wow this level was great, I think your best man!

    _______________________________________Good_________________________________________
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    - Visuals were very detailed and relatively realistic.
    - Corner editing was good.
    - Emitter-work was top-notch, nice job!
    - Loved the changing buildings!
    - Story was brilliant, but tragic and sad at the end.
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    ________________________________________Bad_________________________________________
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    - Personally I didn't like the ending where he jumps but that's just because I don't like sad things like that. (It was still a neat transition).
    - A couple typos in the Magic Mouths but they were hardly noticeable.

    [/spoiler]
    _______________________________________Rating________________________________________
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    and a
    - Although it was short, I thought the story was great and the level showed how you are improving as a creator. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
    [/spoiler]

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    i loved this level. The story was really good and there are a lot of memorable parts in this level that will make me play it again and again. The detail was amazing also, especially in the apartment. Great great level.
    Could u check out my level frost in the factory and letmenowhatyouthink? Cant wait to see more levels from you! Five Stars and a Heart.

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    Loved the level Wertpol! A beautiful and poetic journey, I'd call this experiment a rousing success You and kaiju_kid with your sad yet emotionally powerful endings- I love it, a great change of pace from the usual super-upbeat happy sack platformers! Great use of emitters, I liked how the environment changed with the story as you went on. Playing this level was like running through an interactive piece of art/poetry.

    Great and different level Wertpol! Good luck in the contest, I look forward to moar!

    In love with Love,
    -ST

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