Angelgozen wants to play!

[Angelgozen]

First off Tripple_sss your right, i try not to comment on anything that i wouldn't help with solution (try anyway) I'd say your first song choice will suit us half the level, the second should be...well to be honest i dunno about the second song but if you only stick with two songs your level will be fine XD

NOW REVIEW!

Devon Part 1 & 2
By Qrii_Nakari

Part 1:http://lbp.me/v/xrt1g5
Part 2: http://lbp.me/v/y609n7

There is a reason i lmped them together in this review instead of eahc it's own part. The reason is if i did this it would mean both parts have seperate concerns that need to be adressed, although this shares some sepreate concerns it's not many so i thought i would lump them together.

First off Some things i thought were brilliant! (meaning creative and really stuck with me long after i beat the level)
Your visuals man, the environment you create could not be made better, your level designs are flawless. (if there are flaws it doesn't hinder the level at all). The various degrees of red combining with fire and Jelly (which i believe is blood in this level) all work to make a visual feast and a REAL EXPERIENCE. You put alot of heart in this and it's as obvious as LBP is fun XD I had to take out the white gloves and magnifying glass to review this level XD.

Level Overview

1) Visuals, i can't gush over it enough you created a perfect level for your storyline and i can't imagine it being any better XD

2) Music, Down with the sickness and (i don't know the second...it sounds like down with the sickness but i know it's not the same, if im wrong then your still genius XD) ANYHOW both songs fit your level to a key and it didn't get old nomatter how many times i played it or how long it took to get past an obstacle. I will have to say the puase between song end and song loop is a bit long but im not sure anything can be done about that >_<.

3) Chracter design, Your monsters were amazingly done and none of them clashed with your theme, environment and mood. Your sackbot monetr summons remained a feature i loved to look at XD HOWEVER your summoner could use a repaint, some of the orange peacks out on his forhead, that's about it for him, Your trickster was nicely done, i had a girl with me who says she could have made a better one but she still thought the trickster was a great costume XD "don't midn her she likes to nit pick"

4) Storyline, A Master Piece a simple story line that luanches you into the game without need to 10 minutes of sitting and understanding, it was quick and too the point. For those who never played this the storyline is, A creature goes into your "lover's/neighbor/friend's house and throws her into a portal, you run in after him to save her...
Simple, no? But Loveable, yes XD This is the ancient storyline that we have loved since Mario XD

5) Platforming, This was new to me thoughout the whole thing, nothing said oh wait i know exactly how this works, nothing was simple enough for meto ace but never hard enough to throw out the window XD It was a sweet ride throughout the level but not sweet enough to kick up my feet and just play while im playing PSP. (which i do alot so if you take me from the PSP your a good maker)

6) Originality, goes without saying, you my friend are a true creator XD

Two concerns

1) I WANT THE NEXT ONE O___________O

2) Your creature skills weren't that amazing, and don't take this personal i havn't met a guy with real creature making talent, i've played some levels where they make sick animals and amazing detailed spiders, bee's and other things but never have i seen soe original creature someone made from scracth with real flavor to it. The Eye Bat things is exactly what i'm talking about, and i just didn't liek the way they felt in the level... it wasn't bad enough to hinder it but it wasn't as perfect as it could be. Also your SLudge's arm, my advice it add a sheet of black material and make it long enough so that it shows a full arm when extended and yet sine the whole creature is black it won't stand out when retracted XD

I'm still trying to find my reviewing identity so bare with me XD for now im just going to do it simple becuase i didn't like the rating of my last review i mean it made sense but i didn't like the way it felt

ANYHOW

Pros: -Amazing Visuals and environment
-Great choice of Music
-Amazing Costumes
-Original and detailed platforming
-Easy to follow storyline with great development

Cons: -Creature feature

Overall Score: 10/10
Concluding Comment: Nearly MM pick worthy, the creature feature is the only downer but it never stays with me, i only remember everythingelse XD

[Ramify]

Hey angel, now the PSN is finally back up checking Ice Princess 2.2 please..

[Qrii_Nakari]

Wow! Thank you so much for your amazing review on my levels! It's ironic though because I felt that my visuals were kinda weak despite what everyone else says. Thank you very much for stating otherwise though! The music made for the levels are actually called Inside the Fire (for Part 1) and Mistress, which were originally created by the real-life band Disturbed. I just recreated them for use in my level. I also feel that the delay in the song looping is terrible, but I was hoping no one would notice. :P Perhaps I'll look into ways of decreasing that gap.

As for the character designs, each of them were designed under the impression that I couldn't go over the 10-decoration mark and with the thermo also counting the amount of detail I was putting onto the sackbots I couldn't really put on much anyway. :/ Although, I'm very happy that you're okay with them! I didn't know that the Summoner's colors were going missing though! XD I've never noticed that, so I wonder if something's been changed without me knowing it... I would like to see your friend's "better" version of the Trickster though. Not saying that I'm trying to prove her wrong; I was just curious on her designs.

Thanks for mentioning the creatures too! ...and how terrible they are. xD The series were actually my first LBP2 levels, which was also the first time I was trying to make my own creatures. So I understand how you thought they weren't cool. :P I'll definitely keep that in mind for my future levels though! Thank you once again!

Edit: Oh by the way, you can review the Ninja Baby if you'd like but you don't have to. ^^ It's your choice.

[Angelgozen]

@ Ramify Of course i'll gladly play that, i got Godzillas level then Ninja baby (but ninja might be first...) then you which should be a treat for me XD

Also @Qrii_Nakari I'll tell her to make it and hopefull i can add you on friend list and show you what she got. I knew it was disturbed but i couldn't label the song, sweet XD And i totally understand about bumbing your head against the limit, it sucks when it comes to level and character design you realise how much that limit is annoying XD For a first series i have to say that i couldn't tell at all, you did such a great job i just ranked you up aainst MM picks XD you put a surprise in my panda suit right there lol
But seriously it was a delight to play and im still taking people there so hopefully i can make your famous XD

OH AND CHECKERS GILUPL I FORGOT O_O

[Angelgozen]

I'M sorry it's taken 3 days...im very stressed out with alot of things, but i shouldn't put off my reviews :P reviews are baking i should have them by the end of the day latest...(and i say this alot but this time im sure i'll have it!)

[Angelgozen]

i failed O_O

[Meteorites]

I believe you posted a reply in my advertising topic already, but here...
Final Fantasy X- Turn-based RPG
By Meteoroids
http://lbp.me/v/0gc3hp

[denis_is-5]

Hello. You must forget about this my level.
Review it if you'll get same free time.

[Godzilla]

Hey Angelgozen,

I completely understand if it is hard to get to my level right now. Take as much time as you need, I'm not in a hurry. Real life is alot more important than LBP.

[Angelgozen]

sorry everyone i wont bore you with details but long story short,
My life got turned to crapola for awhile... and im working on my level

But those arn't excuses for my disregarding my promise to help people, so bear with me it will be up soon

[DarrienEven]

People can wait if your busy in real life.
Video games come 2nd to real life so its understandable.

[mercury7891]

Hi, when you get a chance can you review my level?
Level name: Baaarmy Herding
PSN id: mercury7891
Lbp.me: http://lbp.me/v/0rehtj
Thanks
Sorry, didn't read the above posts. There really is no hurry

[ZeusInTraining]

the level in my sig? could i have both review types?

[BluntsMcGhee]

I'd like a nice guy review on my Zebra Monster Truck level.

PSN ID: BluntsMcGhee
Level name: Zebra Monster Truck With Reward.

Thanks in advance.

[Saohc]

Give me a few Nit and Gritty reviews:
http://lbp.me/v/0spdtw
http://lbp.me/v/0q6t73

I'll post my horror levels later