Madera

[DragonHunterEx]

http://lbp.me/v/ymg-by

Hey there

All of you who love classic platformer should try this level
It's the third level and the second platformer i made in lbp2. please let me hear what you think about it!

A little info on the name: "la madera" means "wood" on spain, and that's how the level was build, mainly out of wood material.
I hope you like it

[FriedGoat]

Very good! Enjoyed this playthrough, there is one area that needs an extra checkpoint where the moon and the clouds are but other than that good!

F4F in sig thanks!

[DragonHunterEx]

Thanks a lot for your feedback

ok i will think about placing another checkpoint near the moon area, thanks for the advice!

Already played your level, just take a look in your thread

[DragonHunterEx]

There should be enough checkpoints

[Voganlight]

Queued, will write an in-game review.

F4F: Frantic

[DragonHunterEx]

ok thanks, queued your level

[PTdragon]

Very well designed Level. Madera in portuguese is (Madeira) in english Wood.. and the level demonstrate really that Everything is wood.
That wood guys is very fun :P when we jump and he say.. You almost got the higger point.. was hilarious hehe.
Overall the level is very good and i enjoyed play it. Nice job .

[DragonHunterEx]

thank you

[DragonHunterEx]

Update:

Added some minor details, worked on a few things that seemed to be kind of undone.
Would like to hear some new feedback

[DrDeath]

I really liked it. Great job. Thank you.

[hitman_472]

hey i just played your level and i really enjoyed it. I love the visuals made entirely of wood and the platforming is really fun most of the time. the only part i had some trouble with was the swinging part i had some trouble gettiing to the very last ball. Other than that this is great and should have many more plays.
I would appreciate feedback on my level thread too

[fei0x]

Hey, just gave your level a go. Real sharp. You had good aesthetics everything works well, great pacing and fun.

The only thing i could think of to improve wa that the camera was a little low near the beginning for me, not that it really inhibited anything

Also after the really big bounce pad, I dropped back down to grab more points, noticed that I landed on top of the arch. I cleverly walked to the left... but I wonder if I had walked to the right what might have happened.

In any case I think you have a wonderful level and i don't think you need to change anything. All I'm looking forward to is more.
Thanks for the fun play.

Please check out my latest level too: F4F in the sig.

[unskilled]

Great !
The only thing I would improve is placement on the bubbles for the tilted bounce pads near the beginning. You actually have to aim a little higher than the bubbles to make it onto the next platform.


Please F4F my sig if you get a chance!

[DragonHunterEx]

hey i just played your level and i really enjoyed it. I love the visuals made entirely of wood and the platforming is really fun most of the time. the only part i had some trouble with was the swinging part i had some trouble gettiing to the very last ball. Other than that this is great and should have many more plays.
I would appreciate feedback on my level thread too

Thank you for the nice feedback the last ball is supposed to be hard to reach
Queued your level.

The only thing i could think of to improve wa that the camera was a little low near the beginning for me, not that it really inhibited anything

Also after the really big bounce pad, I dropped back down to grab more points, noticed that I landed on top of the arch. I cleverly walked to the left... but I wonder if I had walked to the right what might have happened.

Thank you fei0x for this detailed review im going to look at the camera near the beginning again to set the zone a bit higher.
it was really smart to walk left there's just a free way ticket to the last checkpoint on the right side Queued your level!

Great !
The only thing I would improve is placement on the bubbles for the tilted bounce pads near the beginning. You actually have to aim a little higher than the bubbles to make it onto the next platform.


Please F4F my sig if you get a chance!

Good point, i will take a look at the bubbles again.
Thanks for the feedback Queued your level of course!

[DragonHunterEx]

Changed camera setting at the level entrance.
Should be fine for now