Waterfall Caverns

[hitman_472]

This is a platformer set in a cave setting. I tried my best to make the level as beautiful as possible. I hope you enjoy it!

Any feedback is always appreciated be it positive or negative.

http://lbp.me/v/z8cynb

[BabyFace]

You did a good job on creating ambiance. good music selection...great decor. only thing that would have made it look really cool would've been rain, coming though some of the roofs of the caves.

[hitman_472]

I cant believe im almost at the top of the cool pages!!

Babyface thanks for the feedback. Rain would be nice but i dont think i know how i would do that and still make it feel like being underground. I have qeued a level of yours and will try it soon.

[Shade_seeker]

Hi Hit man, and well done for a great level.
Does what it says on the tin, great looking platformer. Nothing complicated, hard to work out, too tough or repetative. Looks great, plays well, though maybe a tad short?
I did notice you left a bit of dark matter visible on the light above the first bit where you have to swing over the spikes, apart form that and its short length, nothing else to report really.....oh, apart from how the hell are you getting all those plays???/ When I went on to play it 85 others were already playing it omg !!!!!!! Oh I dream of getting that sort of interest, do you know something I don't?

If you get a chance to return the F4F, would like to know what you think of my level 'House of the flying diggers boss fight'

Keep up the good work!

[Scholarship]

I just queued the level and will play it later today. It sounds interesting and seems to have some very positive feedback, so it caught my attention. Anyway, do you think you could return the favor? http://lbp.me/v/y4n7x0

The F4F thread: http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...g-Piece-Part-1

[hitman_472]

Thanks for the feedback shade seeker. I cant believe i didnt see that dark matter i have removed it now and yes i know it is a bit short but i wont be adding anything to it now ill start another level. And about the levels popularity i dont really know how it happened lol i republished the level a few times till it had about 10 plays and suddenly it was on page 3 of the cool list!! i got lucky i guess.

I have queud your level and also scholarship's level and will play them later.

[The inFamous Sack]

UPDATED POST


Your level has so many plays and counting, it's crazy lol.

Got a chance to play your level the other day. I reallyyy enjoyed the vibe and theme you created with the cavern. Very believable and nicely done. The level has a very tranquil feel to it which is a nice change of pace from all the other games that are made constantly. I'm sure I hearted it, it definitely deserves it.

Nice job!!


Shifty

[fei0x]

oh wow for such a fresh post I didn't expect such a well constructed, and highly played level.
looks like you've worked out all the kinks already.

looks awesome, great use of camerawork and sound. the only thing I didn't get was what the deal with the underwater box was... It didn't seem like I was able to get in.

fun level though, looking forward to more. =D

If you've got some time, please check out my latest level. F4F in the sig, thanks.

[Sabre_]

Feedback

Rated:

Positives:
+Platforming was okay
+Design looked good
+Music set off a calm relax feel to the level
+Environment looked good
+Visuals were great

Negatives:
-No negatives

Overall good job keep up the good work..
F4F- Uncharted 2- Break and Enter (ill add link later today... on my ps3)

[hitman_472]

Thanks for your feedback.
fei0x you cant get it the box because i filled it with small blocks of dark matter. it is meant to drain the water only.

I will que your levels.

[LittleBigDes]

I'm interested as I'm working on a cave sort of level with water here and there, queueing it now for later.

(Im yet to publish but keep an eye out for me, would be nice for a return F4F).

[JustinArt]

Nice level. It has an interesting gameplay and visuals.

VISUALS:
The level has solid lighting, and it's well corner edited. I think you need to add a bit more stickers to this level.

SOUND:
Good music, and I liked how the sounding changes when you enter the caves.

GAMEPLAY:
The level has great use of the grabinator. I think you should add more lighting to the surroundings of the cavern to have players see where they supposed to throw the bombs at.

OVERALL:
It's worth playing. No bugs and problems.A yeah vote.

F4F "Cybernetic Adventures Beta"

[DragonHunterEx]

Awsome work

Very nice design that surely goes along with the theme.
A great atmosphere combined with simple platforming and nice ideas, thumps up!
It's on the ingame cool page and deservedly so.

[tru3_skitz0]

My friends and I played this last night and it wasn't because I wanted feedback. We truly enjoyed it even with 4 players. It is a little bit simplistic in design and I have seen some more detailed levels out there but this one was truly fun and I yayed it without question.

F4F the level at the bottom of my sig. Great job and thanks in advance.