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    Yellow & Green. by valmassoi
    After a nasty fall while mountain climbing, Sackboy finds himself stuck in a deep valley. The only way out is a trip through the bumpy route.

    Well, I finally got this one out. It wasn't a fun one to make, nearly every 'contraption' I made broke and it got really frustrating. It's definitely not my best work :/ But I wanted to publish this one so I could get working on my next level which will definitely be better.

    Some minor hiccups to be on the lookout for: lag on bubbles, weird launchers, and screwy dialogue at the end. I just wanted to point these out so you all know I'm aware of them lol.

    This level takes place before A Bubbly Garden and was originally called Green & Yellow. But I found that lil' Wayne has a song called that so.... :P

    Not really looking for oodles of feedback, but it's still encouraged





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    Nicely done, now, off to play this level.

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    Aaaaaaaand the originality of the name of my upcoming level, 'Green!' goes back with 138%.

    Looking forward to play once I have time. which is over ten hours or sumthing.


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    PLEASE! Do not spotlight it by yourself
    Play level SOON!!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by doggy97 View Post
    PLEASE! Do not spotlight it by yourself
    Do you really think spotlighters can spotlight themselves?


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    A short review from me.

    The Goods:
    - Great visuals and corner editing
    - Good choice of music
    - VelcroJonze reference

    The Bad:

    - The level was TOO short
    - The spikes by the part with those moving rocks should be glued to something
    - The switch looked weird. It was like glitched...

    The Most Confusing:
    - The guy at the end xD

    Overall Rating: (Too short. C'mon I know you can make it better)
    Last edited by Schark94; 09-09-2011 at 07:12 PM. Reason: time for a short review!

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    Yah, spotlighters that release one of their levels can kinda make a recommendation on it, but they don't get to give an actual vote/verdict.

    Good work Val, the level was very fun, and I liked that material choice. Shame it was so glitchy in Create, that always holds back the level. Sam stuff happened to my Logic Pack level. Can't wait for your next level!
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    ahhh does this have to do with the youtube sensation green and yellow by any chance lol
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    Quote Originally Posted by doggy97 View Post
    PLEASE! Do not spotlight it by yourself
    Play level SOON!!!
    haha no. I actually don't think I deserve a spotlight for this one.....

    Quote Originally Posted by schark1997 View Post
    A short review from me.

    The Goods:
    - Great visuals and corner editing
    - Good choice of music
    - VelcroJonze reference

    The Bad:

    - The level was TOO short
    - The spikes by the part with those moving rocks should be glued to something
    - The switch looked weird. It was like glitched...

    The Most Confusing:
    - The guy at the end xD

    Overall Rating: (Too short. C'mon I know you can make it better)
    I'm really surprised you even like the visuals lol. The level is too short, I know :/ I really wanted to glue those spikes, but every time I glued those, a cute animal would die, so I didn't. The switch was indeed glitched! I tried ungluing it, but I got a red screen 0__o So I tried again and my PSP just crashed. I was hoping the guy wouldn't be confusing at the end D: Maybe it'd make more sense if you read the description (i hope).

    Quote Originally Posted by Ricky-III View Post
    Good work Val, the level was very fun, and I liked that material choice. Shame it was so glitchy in Create, that always holds back the level. Sam stuff happened to my Logic Pack level. Can't wait for your next level!
    I'm surprised you liked it Ricky! By looking what I've said before I'm obviously not very proud of it :P


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    Pretty fun level Val, but I agree it could be longer...

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    Okay, feedback time.

    Awesome Stuff:
    -Visuals were alright
    -Some of the dialogue made me laugh my A$$ off.
    -Challenging platforming

    Stuff That Needs To Be Sent To The Void:
    -Y U so short?
    -Theeeere wasss sommme lllag
    -*Boing* one of your launchers killed me

    Stuff That Was Strange,Yet Awesome:
    -A new kinda switch, place here, use there.

    The Rating:
    Even tho random launchers killed me outta nothing and the level should be longer,
    I had fun playing it a few times for that it gets:


    @Val-: BTW, nice new avi, strange to see you without green, its like me without Voids.

    @Schark-: Aced it before you, BAM!
    Last edited by nysudyrgh; 09-10-2011 at 11:40 PM.


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    Quote Originally Posted by nysudyrgh View Post
    @Schark-: Aced it before you, BAM!
    Yeah... couldn't find the bubble emitter before, but now I'm also on the 1st place.^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by schark1997 View Post
    Yeah... couldn't find the bubble emitter before, but now I'm also on the 1st place.^^
    What!? I found it on my first try. :lawl:


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    You might be wondering why I've been less active lately. Well, I've been sick for a few weeks now. I'll play this level as soon as possible.

    EDIT: Just played it.

    and a

    It was short, but still an excellent level.
    Last edited by ConverseFox; 09-11-2011 at 03:16 PM.

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    hmm, interesting ... by the screenshots it looks great. i'll test it in a moment

    EDIT!:Well, I just downloaded the level and...
    I really liked their environment, it looks very nice. I liked the difficulty spikes, good! The only bad thing was that it is a little short, but I like your work, well done!

    I give you +
    Last edited by Pulparindo15; 09-15-2011 at 09:04 PM.

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