Our Story

[unc92sax]

Our Story by unc92sax
Travel through the wonderful world of the old LBP PSP. Complete challenging riddles and platforming. Win many points and prizes to add to your collection. There is some good corner editing and characters. You can win the characters. But beware, LBP PSP world is dying. Will you make it out alive?
WARNING: this is not an easy level, but don't give up.
This is a project that is in effort to save the LBP PSP community.
Thanks for all the support and advice guys.

[nysudyrgh]

Wellwell, lets check this out.

[unc92sax]

I put alot of details and corner editing.

[Wertpol]

"We must save the LittleBigPlanet! It's exploding with terrible levels(no offense)!"
For some reason, that part made me LOL so much
EDIT: I feel quite stupid, but what am I supposed to write at the part with the stickers?

[unc92sax]

was it good?

[unc92sax]

To get past the sticker riddle. Put SAVELBP.

[Wertpol]

I had tried that one first but it didn't work, restarting the level lol...

[unc92sax]

it worked for me

[Schark94]

So you said today/yesterday it's about 50% done and now it's ready? This was made in one day? Well I'm not expecting much from this level but I'm going to play it to see how much did you write about "Our Story"...

[Green Dino Bone]

I've sent a request to be a part of the group. Thanks for including me in your level. SAVE LBP PSP!

[nysudyrgh]

Well I'm not expecting much from this level

Change your mind, its awe-some.
Such improvement from Scardey Sack. :O

[Schark94]

Gotta say... You've done well mate.
I think there will be more members on LBPC soon.
...but this level still needs some visual improvements.

[unc92sax]

Some n00b rated this level 2 stars, and now it only has a three star rating. I bet he couldn't beat it!

Could you guys beat it?

[WoodburyRaider]

Gotta say... You've done well mate.
I think there will be more members on LBPC soon.
...but this level still needs some visual improvements.

Guys, being welcoming and friendly to new members doesn't mean you can't help them improve by giving constructive criticism. You guys are all to lovey dovey with each other which doesn't help anyone improve. As for this level, I'd say it needs work, and a lot of it. First of all, I'm flattered that you included my name in your level. However, you can't just use other people's names without their consent, especially if your level doesn't represent your best work. This level sends a strong message, but one that is too often lost in the level. In tweenage terms, someone who isn't on LBPCentral wouldn't know how to get passed the password. As a great creator once said, "You should NEVER require the player to do something so random as a password to continue on with the level." This is because the chances of someone guessing a code, especially a long one is slim. Even though it may seem easy to you, others might have trouble with it. As for the visuals, I'd say they are spotty at best. While you understand the need for detail in small things like leaves, this level doesn't look neatly put together with upside down-diagonal race gates and black cardboard material with "Yeah!" stickers on it.

All in all, I suggest you spend more time on your levels in the future because in this one, it unfortunately shows. You have great potential and your confidence is inspiring, but honestly, you can't be so arrogant. As for your signature, I'm sure plenty of people on the site have athletic interests including me. Just because you bandwagon UNC doesn't make you any better. Sorry, but someone had to say it. I don't mean to offend you at all with this post, but rather to wake you and everyone else up. This level is a great start, but you need to keep working at it. =]

[unc92sax]

Guys, being welcoming and friendly to new members doesn't mean you can't help them improve by giving constructive criticism. You guys are all to lovey dovey with each other which doesn't help anyone improve. As for this level, I'd say it needs work, and a lot of it. First of all, I'm flattered that you included my name in your level. However, you can't just use other people's names without their consent, especially if your level doesn't represent your best work. This level sends a strong message, but one that is too often lost in the level. In tweenage terms, someone who isn't on LBPCentral wouldn't know how to get passed the password. As a great creator once said, "You should NEVER require the player to do something so random as a password to continue on with the level." This is because the chances of someone guessing a code, especially a long one is slim. Even though it may seem easy to you, others might have trouble with it. As for the visuals, I'd say they are spotty at best. While you understand the need for detail in small things like leaves, this level doesn't look neatly put together with upside down-diagonal race gates and black cardboard material with "Yeah!" stickers on it.

All in all, I suggest you spend more time on your levels in the future because in this one, it unfortunately shows. You have great potential and your confidence is inspiring, but honestly, you can't be so arrogant. As for your signature, I'm sure plenty of people on the site have athletic interests including me. Just because you bandwagon UNC doesn't make you any better. Sorry, but someone had to say it. I don't mean to offend you at all with this post, but rather to wake you and everyone else up. This level is a great start, but you need to keep working at it. =]

What are you talking abut? My dad went to unc!