The New World - a World Made of Cardboard. by Muffin_-_Knight
The famous scientist has invented a portal to another world, a world of CardBoard! In this world no colors and all is same. You-the first man who went into this world. Walk through this world.
So, i finished work on my first part of sackboy adventure in cardboard world. Donwload it and say me what you think abaut ithope you enjoy it ^_^ Donwload my other levels too
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02-08-2012 #1Patch of Cloth
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The New World - a World Made of Cardboard.
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02-08-2012 #2New Avi ... :D
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Heh... I also worked on a cardboard level but it seems that I won't finish it on my PSP.
It's called "The Cardboardians" - no one steals this title!
I will make it on LBP2. Okay 'nuff said!
Will play your level as soon as I can.
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02-08-2012 #3Smashed!
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I played it, its very cool, Schark.
I'll give good feed back later Knight, too lazy to type it out right now.
Levels PSP:
Steam *Spotlighted**Highest Rated Page 6*|The Tree Of Life *Spotlight Nod*|Russian Rocks *Spotlighted*|The Gravity Caves *Spotlighted*
Levels PSVITA:
Nys Labs OmniCircle Battle|[VCC] Nys Labs Christmas Edition|The Iron Mountains(Coming soon ... Maybe)|Outback Jack(Coming soon)
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02-08-2012 #4Patch of Cloth
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Thank you man
oh , i havent ps3 yet 
when i buy it i will look for your level. And good name for level
Oh ok man, i will waiting for it
And hope all enjoy that level !Last edited by Muffin_-_Knight; 02-08-2012 at 05:34 PM. Reason: write new words :D
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02-08-2012 #5New Avi ... :D
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Thank you and welcome on LBPCENTRAL! C:
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02-08-2012 #6Patch of Cloth
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Thank
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02-08-2012 #7Smashed!
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I already like this guy, he cheers me up for some reason.
Must be your way of acting. xD
Levels PSP:
Steam *Spotlighted**Highest Rated Page 6*|The Tree Of Life *Spotlight Nod*|Russian Rocks *Spotlighted*|The Gravity Caves *Spotlighted*
Levels PSVITA:
Nys Labs OmniCircle Battle|[VCC] Nys Labs Christmas Edition|The Iron Mountains(Coming soon ... Maybe)|Outback Jack(Coming soon)
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02-08-2012 #8Patch of Cloth
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XDDDDDDDD lol xD i am funny and friedly xD , so LBPCENTRAL !!!!
So, someone try my level?Last edited by Muffin_-_Knight; 02-08-2012 at 06:13 PM.
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02-08-2012 #9
Going to play it right now and give you some feedback...
DARN IT
I failed to beat the level... So I can't give you a whole lot of feedback. It was the part with those spring boards... So frustratingly hard. I've never rage quit a level before, but I now have. I was good, what I played, though I can't help but feel that by going with a cardboard theme, you are really holding yourself back from truly amazing visuals. It looked good, but I really think going with something else could have benefited the level.
Finally, I really think this level could use a name change. Either "The New World" or "A World Made of Cardboard" would work a lot better. It just seems overly long. Preference I guess.
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Thanks!
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02-08-2012 #10Patch of Cloth
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First normal opinion abaut my level. So, yea i spend a lot of time, to make it look awesume. It really hard, but finish it - possible ^_^ i too think about another material in level, and finally dicided to made next part with another materials too. So, i hope my next part will be beter !
Hope you enjoy that level! In next part you will be in cave Thank for playing my level C:
P.S. My friends too say what level name is too long =/Last edited by Muffin_-_Knight; 02-08-2012 at 07:42 PM. Reason: P.S.
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02-08-2012 #11I Am A Mad Scientist...
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Man. I cant play this because I'm grounded!
Newest Level:
Level Projects:
Labyrinth (Vita), The Apocalyptic Series (PSP)
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02-09-2012 #12Patch of Cloth
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Bad...very bad...
Originally Posted by unc92sax
Man. I cant play this because I'm grounded!
Just 1 man try my level? Hey wake up peoples!! (Only 6 peoples play it)
Hey, nysudyrgh, you beat my record xD , so what you think about it?Last edited by Muffin_-_Knight; 02-09-2012 at 05:26 AM. Reason: Aliens... a lot of Aliens
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02-09-2012 #13Fuzz Ball
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Downloading your level now. Thanks for accepting my friend request. I'm fairly new here too, I've only been here about 2 months. Anyway, welcome to LBPCentral.
My Levels (from oldest to newest):Big Tree, Shipping Docks, Dreamtime, Sacktoy's House Adventure, Harvest Fields, Sewer or Later,Sack Racing Championship (SPOTLIGHT NOD) (Re-published), The Deep Blue, Enter the Fantasy, Think Pink!Coming Soon:Uplifting
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02-09-2012 #14I Am A Mad Scientist...
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I will play in 2 weeks. Originally Posted by Muffin_-_Knight
Newest Level:
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Labyrinth (Vita), The Apocalyptic Series (PSP)
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02-10-2012 #15Sack
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I know the cardboard theme was the premise of the level, but you are really limiting yourself by making a cardboard-only level. There was a lot of aesthetic potential but just way too much brown.
I highly recommend using a more interesting range of materials next time.
The gameplay flowed very well; it was not the most original, but it was entertaining and overall was a solid platformer.
I'd suggest playing through the level more to test it. There was one jump after the sprung-bolt spring-board section that was barely reachable and took me like 10 tries, and the getting from the last gear to the platform also took me awhile to get. I'm not sure if you intended the level to be difficult, but I'd guess that it's harder than you realize, especially for people who aren't so good at playing (like me).
Still it was a solid level, I just feel like you have the potential to make something even better.
And sorry if that came across as too critical, because really it was a good level.My PSP Creations:
Down Underground (Spotlighted!) <--A sewer adventure; my first level and first spotlight!
Volcanic Activities: The Big Freeze<--My newest level, a treacherous adventure through a frozen volcano.
Feel free to check these out or PM me if you want me to review one of your PSP levels!
Hoping to get a Vita in the near future (price drop would be nice)...
