Scarlet, on the Dark Side

[NOT_SCOT]

Republished and I have set up a device to adjust lighting. I have no way to test it so any feedback will be very helpful. I had some material changes, adjusted all the lights, and incorporated the use of a lit skin sackbot.

[thebrominator]

Hey, just tried your level and thought it was great! I liked the light adjuster thing, although I was confused at first. The darkness really worked well but I think you should add some contrast in color, for example use a whole variety of reds, not just a plain red, because it does get quite simple at points. I loved the moving patterns of red and light you created throughout, the designs on the spinners were cool. Again, a more diverse group of platforming would just complement this level even further, if there is one thing you could work on, you incorporate the spinners into more interesting configurations. Other than that, I thought the level was a fun, long, and challenging play.

Since this is feedback for feedback, here are my levels:
Planet X
Part 1: http://lbp.me/v/bb6f0j
Part 2: http://lbp.me/v/bb6gqe
Part 3: http://lbp.me/v/bb6g7t (if you like dark levels, try this one, its very hard though and may need some work)

Anyways, keep up the good work, looking forward to hearing your feedback!

[shotgun_69]

Have queued and will give it a go later on.

[Grimed487]

Added, I'll get back to you on it as soon as I can

[shotgun_69]

The option section at the start is very well thought of. Once you actually start the level the visuals and use of colour are very striking and set the tone for the level perfectly. Also the option to make it a race or not adds a nice dimension to the level. There was one section were I had to grab a circular piece of material and it raised itself up with a chain but it was very awkward to get onto the platform after it and I died several times. Apart from that the rest of the level is really brilliant, the whole athestic never becomes boring or bland because of the differing forms of platforms and contraptions used to proceed through the level. One nit pick would be the use of sackbots in the level as it would seem that they are not need as you could just do the level as sackboy so would maybe get rid of them. But that is just me being critical as I really really enjoyed everything about this level. Very well done.

[NOT_SCOT]

To shotgun_69:
The reason I used the sackbot was for visibility reasons. The level is as dark as you can get making it a little hard to see unless you have a lit skin. Thank You for the feedback and I will get to your level this weekend.

To the brominator:
Thank You for the feedback. My next level after Blackout I am going to work on variety. That was the one critique that I was not able to fix. Great score too. I am really grateful for all the help.

This forum thread has provided me with tons of help and I wish I would have joined LBP Central sooner. Thanks to all.