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    Default Please try my first level!

    my first level... Laser hockey... needs plays... i want to get a whole bunch of plays or hearts or rates and really want to get on the cool pages... please try it out and tell me what to change, what should stay and help me get an mm pick! thanks.

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    Hi there! Welcome to LBPC. You should read through this, Level Showcase Guide, it will help you get your thread noticed more.


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    Hey guy, do not rush, all in due time. Rest assured that you will have my played and I hope you get many more.
    Last edited by TYeeN; 06-19-2013 at 03:58 AM.

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    Its not important to have a lvl on the cool page.

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    Hi,

    Welcome to LBPC.
    As biorogue wrote, you'll have more success, if you read and follow the guide he linked.
    Most players are a little bit lazy and don't want to search for a level. So adding a level link for example is very important.
    Here is yours http://lbp.me/v/k2ch5x


    Good luck on your mission to get a MM-Pick with your first level
    Last edited by avundcv; 06-19-2013 at 05:40 PM.

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    lol i didnt mean an mm pick on my FIRST level i meant in general :P... and im currently remaking this post... just cant seem to get the images to work

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    Please do not create duplicate threads.
    I moved your info to this thread and posted here because the auto moderation system catches posts with a large amount of links by members with 5 posts or less.

    YOUR POST:

    Laser hockey


    A new air hockey level on LBP2! But a bit more retro. What I am asking of you is to try it out... tell me what to change to make it better... and don't forget that it doesn't hurt my feelings when i get hearted :P Thanks in advance!






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    WOAH WHAT?!?!? i keep getting a message that the thread is not valid and i have to talk to the administrator...... thanks though

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    The level is fun, but very buggy unfortunately I played it with my brother (breaker of levels, and bringer of doom), and well... he found the bugs

    First of all, it looks like stick is censored in your speech bubble. Some things get auto filtered when put online, so you might want to check that it didn't accidentally have a D in it If you want to be really fancy, you can even put in images using code found here: http://wiki.lbpcentral.com/Community:Text_symbols . Additionally, "criticize" is spelled incorrectly.

    It took us a while to get to 8 because we kept getting things stuck on other things. The ball got stuck in the paddle, the ball got stuck in the wall, and the paddle got stuck in the wall as well. In order to fix these issues, I recommend placing an invisible layer of some other material in front of your colourful walls and on the paddle backs. That way, you get to keep the style you were shooting for, and hopefully nothing will get stuck on anything else again

    Finally, it seems there were some bugs with the scoring system. He won the game (to my disappointment ), but for some reason it gave me the winning score at the end. Additionally, it seems that the balls didn't disappear once they scored a goal, and he was able to knock a ball that had bounced back into my goal again for double points! You may want to make the balls disappear after they score, to prevent that from happening.

    BUT! These things didn't stop us from enjoying the level. We had to restart a few times, but we were laughing the whole time, and once we stopped getting stuck, it was a fierce competition to the finish. Thanks for the level

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