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    Well hello again sackthings! DRL here with a brand spanking new level for you! This is a warm hearted platformer addressing the issues of pollution and environmental problems! This was originally a level for littlebignetworks AOG contest but i didn't have enough time to finish it and the level was just to big! I had a blast making this so i hope you like it Music is by: Chessguy, Idgowans and breezy-the-pro, Go give them some thanks!

    Here are some fantastic pictures of this fantastic level xD









    Have fun! Oh and this level is 1p only!
    http://lbp.me/v/m9971k
    Last edited by dolphins-r-lame; 06-29-2013 at 06:54 PM.

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    this looks great! got it queued


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    Add it to the queued!

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    Thanks, hope you like it! Dont forget to tell me what you think!

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    Looks great! Queued- I'm definately going to play this next time on.
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    Thanks! Let me know how you like it

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    Thumbs up

    Sounds good, I'll play when I have the LBP2, I wanted to put some levels of AOG in the queue but I forgot, so this will be a good start.

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    Awesome! Id love to hear what you think :3

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    The game play was fun. Very easy actually. I was actually going through wondering when something was going to explode in my face and I'd die 500 times but it never came. The material choices made an effective contrast the gray cardboard VS. the bright green at the end, and I liked having that little epilogue. It gave closure to it all. A fun story with a good message.
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    Im glad you liked it! Thanks for the feedback ive hardly gotten any at all

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    It seems really cool with a nice environment, queued.

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    (F4F, mind checking out my Magician's Platformer level? Click the picture in my Signature for a nice redirection to the lbp.me page)

    This level was very creative. The characters were quite funny, and the platforming aspect was enjoyable. I like the message behind it, about saving water and what-not; definately a good level if LBP were to do a 'Save-The-Enviroment' type thing. I loved the feel of the city itself, with the bits and bobs serving as make-shift platforms, and the buildings following a simple design. All-in-all, a great level. Definately got a Yay from me.
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    Thanks! Ill be sure to check out your lvl asap!

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    I had a lot of fun on this, and enjoyed some of the touches of humor along with its environmental message. Nice and clean design with a few shaky camera bits too (you can't go wrong with shaky camera it brings it to life ect) The platforming was simple with some nice details and it had a nice pace to it.

    I did think the grab 3 soda cans section could have been a bit closer to the big bin, to make it a bit tighter in design but overall it was still fun. Did you use 2 level links? The sewer section wasn't very large, i would have thought it would fit easy inside the first part of the level no?

    I can see you had fun creating it and im glad you did, because i enjoyed it very much
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    Im glad you enjoyed the level and yes... I used teo level link! The first part of thr level was completly full then the sewers was about half way full then the cut scene was about 3/4 full so i was in a bit of a prediciment lol i had to do level link or emit/destroy. I wasnt quite prepared to do that im going to look into that technique for my next level

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    Yay. That was fun

    Like the enjoyable gameplay and the nice characteres you created.

    Very good level

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    Quote Originally Posted by avundcv View Post
    Yay. That was fun

    Like the enjoyable gameplay and the nice characteres you created.

    Very good level
    Yay glad you enjoyed!

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    Queued it, looking forward to playing this later.

    Summary:
    Well this level wasn't exactly what I was expecting, but in a good way! It had simple but fun platforming,mI didn't have any trouble geeting through the level. And it has a great meaniful story too.

    Graphics: 5/5

    I can't say the artwork was over the top(it was still great thoough), but they definitely did the job they were supposed to. The theme was well represented throughout the level. And how you even had custom characters, that weren't sackbots, now that was just amazing! I loved the caterpillar

    Gameplay: 3/5

    The game play was fun. Just jumping and swing around a way over polluted city. There wasn't any ground breaking experience in the platforming, but it wasn't needed. It was pretty much some classic LBP game play.

    Story/Objective: 5/5

    Well umm how do I put this...it was awesome! I don't think I've ever actually played that had a story other than to entertain. It had a great message, and it makes me wish there was more I could do to help the environment.

    Overall: 4.3/5

    This is actually one of the best levels I've played in a while. It was great although, not exactly the most thrilling level. Although maybe that's just me, cause I was hoping for a boss fight with some kind of chemical waste monster. I want a sequel though. One that takes place in the non polluted city. I think that would be cool.
    Last edited by SilverTriforce7; 07-09-2013 at 05:21 PM. Reason: Added feedback

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    Have put it in my que, looks gd. Sorry to hear you didnt finish in time. But you can not rush a good level

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