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    Hey guys! This is my first level, which is called Crystal Cavern. It's a short level that tours you in an underground cave. There are also hidden bubbles scattered throughout the level.



    Here's some pictures to give you an idea of it:









    I'd love to get some feedback and constructive criticism to help me improve on my future levels. Hope you have a great time playing it!


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    Looks cool!
    Queued
    HUgssz~

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    As a first level this is very well done. However stylistically I felt that it was a bit unfinished due to lack of point bubbles.

    Scattering some bubbles about the place would help with guiding the player about where to go next. Some sections felt like I had ended up somewhere by accident. Dropping down onto a platform and getting some points would help with knowing I was going in the right direction.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr_Fusion View Post
    As a first level this is very well done. However stylistically I felt that it was a bit unfinished due to lack of point bubbles.

    Scattering some bubbles about the place would help with guiding the player about where to go next. Some sections felt like I had ended up somewhere by accident. Dropping down onto a platform and getting some points would help with knowing I was going in the right direction.
    I'd keep that in mind.


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    Queued! I like caverns! And levels. And crystal... and bubbles... and cool levels... This must be cool

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