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    Default Rooftop Railings

    My first level in LBP3, unfortunately it's pretty dang short. Fear not, this was only made to test some of LBP3's new features. Currently working a much more bigger Adventure. Anyways here's some pictures:







    Enjoy! https://lbp.me/v/qt06k5y/trailer?p=1&l=12


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    Looks great from the pictures! I'll check it out as soon as I can.


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    Hey DawnBreaker, Just played your level and here's my feedback:

    Positives
    -I liked the environment of the level, it was nice and calm and the music gave it a relaxing feel to it as you played it
    -The Gameplay was alright as well, swinging through rooftops and watching out and dodging hazards along the way
    -The design of the houses and the background looked great and the platforming was clean

    Negatives:
    -In the beginning when you jump into the building next to the potion sign, I got stuck inside one of the teacups and couldn't get out. That shouldn't be an issue to fix I honestly don't know how I ended up inside it.
    -The shortness of the level but as you said you were just testing out the new the features of the game.

    Overall I liked the level and can't wait to see how your adventure turns out


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    I've locked this, I apologize to anyone who has this queued! Will be unlocking in a week or so!

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    I was just going to play this since there's not much to do. Then I saw the lock on LBP.me. Still remains in my queue and I will play it... one day. Don't take too long though.
    - Scott




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    Fixed some minor issues and is now unlocked! Thanks Saber for the feedback!

    Apparently the dynamic thermo doesn't load everything for everyone so o apologize if you can't complete it!
    Last edited by DawnBreaker_23; 12-01-2014 at 10:51 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DawnBreaker_23 View Post
    Fixed some minor issues and is now unlocked! Thanks Saber for the feedback!

    Apparently the dynamic thermo doesn't load everything for everyone so o apologize if you can't complete it!
    It better not be locked when I get home!
    - Scott




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    Awesome level, Dawn!

    Left a review on the level too, but, as short as it may be, it does use a lot of the new features really well, and it plays very much like a story level, well done

    Pro's:

    * Looks great
    * Plays great
    * Lovely use of the Bendy Rail
    * Theme is nicely done

    Con's:

    * I also got stuck in the teacup :P
    * You can use all of the SackPopit items, which makes it easy to mess about (not sure if deliberate, by accident as in not turned off, or if glitch of the game)

    Improvements:

    * Would love to see some more weather effects using the new tweaker
    * Of course, little longer (understand it's a test level though



    Brilliant job though

    Liam


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    Quote Originally Posted by LittleBigSnooth View Post
    Awesome level, Dawn!

    Left a review on the level too, but, as short as it may be, it does use a lot of the new features really well, and it plays very much like a story level, well done

    Pro's:

    * Looks great
    * Plays great
    * Lovely use of the Bendy Rail
    * Theme is nicely done

    Con's:

    * I also got stuck in the teacup :P
    * You can use all of the SackPopit items, which makes it easy to mess about (not sure if deliberate, by accident as in not turned off, or if glitch of the game)

    Improvements:

    * Would love to see some more weather effects using the new tweaker
    * Of course, little longer (understand it's a test level though



    Brilliant job though

    Liam
    I heard the sackpocket use in community levels is a bug. I'm on LBP3 now so I'm going to be playing this level in a moment.

    I've gotta say this level is very good. Great use of the new tools and the theme is pretty great. The level was very fun. And honestly there isn't anything to criticize besides the length but levels take a long time to make anyways. So sorry, this is so short but in summary you have a very great level.

    Oh, and congratulations on your Team Pick!
    Last edited by SEWO97; 12-06-2014 at 01:09 PM.
    - Scott





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    Loved it. It gives a great representation on how future levels could look from LBP's finest.

    A Video Recording for you!



    Oh I almost forgot, there seems to be an issue when falling down the ending pipe to the scoreboard. Most of the time I seem to fall to my death behind the needle gauge. (Which is why I went slow going down it, might be related to falling too fast to switch layers)

    Keep up the good work
    Last edited by JKthree; 12-02-2014 at 09:04 PM.

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    Excelent level, it deserves be a team pick.
    Play, Create and Share, do it now!

    My levels:

    Sackboy's big adventure: North pole.



    The random tower.

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    I think it has been Team Picked now! Well done, Dawn

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    LOOKS AWESOME! Queue'd up and I'll report with feedback!

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